Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position

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Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

In this issue the argument is that the nations should pass laws to preserve the raminder of the wilderness in the natural state even if those areas could be changed for economical gain. With the continuous harsh change in the climate nad the degrading environment should be enough to agree to this point. The very existence of the human race is threatened by overexertion of the natural resources we uses. And the very life of current generation is sufering the consequences. At the dawn of industrial revolution we did not think of the consequences it going to have on the climate. With more and more development in the technology, with more production, the demand for these almost is on the rise. But where is the line to stop before we dug us into a hole that we cannot get out off? lets consider the the merits of this policy.

If we look at the several Asian countries, like singapore, maldives, Bangladesh which are now threatened with the risk of losing land mass due to the rise of sea level. This is the aftermath of the well known global warming. We can also see the rise in the temperature of the world. weather patterns are changing and becoming a threat. Various large scale natural calamities are becoming a common matter. This is bacause of the overuse of the natural resources of the world. From mining for oil and other minerals to cutting down tress for the papers, we are pushing the limit of the echological harmony. If we see the result of the recent hurricane in Bangladesh, the amount of loss is higher due to the cutting down of the coastal natural mangroove forest. This is a good enough reason for starting to reserve the remaing of the forest intact.

Furthermore, in a report from UN, in the last several decade about 10 million species became extinct from the advance of the technology. It is necessary to meet the current hgh demand of the daily needs of people. But the cost we are paying directly and indirectly is becoming high and lethal. By disturbing the natural habitat of the animals we are breaking down the chain of echoogical order. hunting for fun, excess use of resources with out recycling everything is huring the climate and we are watching the the direct efefct in terms of the belligerent pattern of the weather.

However, we cant deny the all of this was donr to accomodate for comfort in the life pf people, for the economic gain of the people. Though that is the case, we cant also ignore the the effect of the actions that we take. If people cant live for whom are going tobe these benefits. Noe, preving the wilderness by passing laws might have some loss in the depratment of economic gain. It might result in losss of employment opprtunity, might result in political lashback. But this is a opportunity cost for a better healthy life. What we will loose in terms of economical aspect, we will gain it in terms of a beeter living condition. we cannot deny the importance of the preserving the nature. The amount of carbon is on the rise, polluted seas and other water bodies are spreading diseases. This is a high time to minimize all these act of hurting the nature.

Thus, it is true that what we are doing is in the sense of betterment of the nation and increasing the living standard of people, we cant turn a blind eye to the impact on the nature. A lot of harm has already been done on the nature. but it is not too late to start amending it. The first step is to preserve what is left and take necessary steps to omit the current techs that are hurting it. This is going to be and adverse effect on the economic gain. But for the sake of the next generation and a healthy life for the curent genration this will be a step in the right direction.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...verexertion of the natural resources we uses. And the very life of current generatio...
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Suggestion: Lets
...into a hole that we cannot get out off? lets consider the the merits of this policy....
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...into a hole that we cannot get out off? lets consider the the merits of this policy....
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Line 1, column 801, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...at we cannot get out off? lets consider the the merits of this policy. If we look at...
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Line 1, column 801, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...at we cannot get out off? lets consider the the merits of this policy. If we look at...
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Suggestion: Weather
...e rise in the temperature of the world. weather patterns are changing and becoming a th...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decade seems to be countable; consider using: 'several decades'.
Suggestion: several decades
...rmore, in a report from UN, in the last several decade about 10 million species became extinct...
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...meet the current hgh demand of the daily needs of people. But the cost we are pay...
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Suggestion: Hunting
...ing down the chain of echoogical order. hunting for fun, excess use of resources with o...
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Line 6, column 438, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...unting for fun, excess use of resources with out recycling everything is huring the clim...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... huring the climate and we are watching the the direct efefct in terms of the belligere...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... huring the climate and we are watching the the direct efefct in terms of the belligere...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...attern of the weather. However, we cant deny the all of this was donr to accomo...
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Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... this was donr to accomodate for comfort in the life pf people, for the economic ...
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Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...the people. Though that is the case, we cant also ignore the the effect of the actio...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...h that is the case, we cant also ignore the the effect of the actions that we take. If ...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...h that is the case, we cant also ignore the the effect of the actions that we take. If ...
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Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... of the actions that we take. If people cant live for whom are going tobe these bene...
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Line 9, column 484, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sult in political lashback. But this is a opportunity cost for a better healthy l...
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Line 9, column 543, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...for a better healthy life. What we will loose in terms of economical aspect, we will ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... in terms of a beeter living condition. we cannot deny the importance of the prese...
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Line 11, column 134, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...asing the living standard of people, we cant turn a blind eye to the impact on the n...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...rm has already been done on the nature. but it is not too late to start amending it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, well, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 105.0 58.6224719101 179% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3049.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 674.0 442.535393258 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5237388724 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0952438579 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49642957538 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458456973294 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.0 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9577079054 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2368421053 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188080776084 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435635321001 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739856907806 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108062231081 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586416274864 0.0667264976115 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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