Nations should suspend the government funding on arts when significant numbers of citizens are unemployed and hungry.
A nation is recognised by its demography, its heritage and culture and governance. These all form foundation stones for the rise of a nation and renowned in the world. Thus, these should be properly functional and maintained. The government receives a fair amount of money as taxes, grants from the foreign countries and trading is to be used for the nation building; whether it is for the art and culture, military, medical facilities, schools and colleges, for the job sector or for the need to eliminate poverty.
The money spent on the preservation and construction of some of the structures/monuments which are a total failure.These should be suspended and the useful projects like employment of the jobless and the population which is deprived of one-time meal should be taken care of with this money.
The government funding of arts sector like construction and renovation of buildings, monuments,museums and libraries , decoration of the various facilities like stations, airports, seaports; various textile industries,painting, pottery, music, dance forms and so on. For example: Eiffel Tower in Paris, Taj Mahal in India, Great wall of China and so on are generating a huge revenue for the nation through tourism. These structures are famous for their uniqueness and are still maintained in shape due to the continuous retrofitting. The money spend on them is worth spending as they attract numerous tourists and are economically viable.
The government is created by the people,for the people and is submissive to the people.
The first priority to the nation should be the welfare of the people and their upliftment. To overcome the problem of joblessness in the nation, providing funds to create job opportunities located near these sites will boost their business as well and will remove
\hunger. Needy will get the place to work and a two-time meal.
If the promotion of arts and crafts and funded sufficiently many startups can be set up; providing daily business to small towns and cities. Indigenous materials can be made, sold at low prices and moreover they will be eco-friendly.Government can also ask the seller to give some material to them and they can sell in the local as well as global markets. This will enhance the confidence of seller to work more. These startups will also enable more workers to come forward and work. Therefore,the creation of working class will automatically eliminate the hunger crisis in the nation.
At last, the only task of the government to fund a particular sector but also to promoting the policies and creating awareness is also necessary at the same time. Hence, it should be well informed to the citizens how they can earn, what all are the items available in the market which needs attention so that they can try their hand in those area, how do proceed with the job, what amount of their material will be shared by the government, what will be the guidelines to carry out a business near the heritage site and many more. These queries should be properly answered by the government; helping them to save some amount of their funds as well as getting some revenue.Therefore, if the direction is towards creation of self-reliant and self-employed income groups the problems of hunger and poverty will be a talk of yesterday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2749.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 545.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04403669725 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06253011243 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506422018349 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 846.9 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.4266297551 60.3974514979 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.904761905 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9523809524 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14798252413 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447368375539 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309080971233 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681925824569 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032202882723 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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