Some people claim that a nation's government should preserve its wilderness areas in their natural state.
Others argue that these areas should be developed for potential economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your
reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of
the views presented.
A nation's economy largely depends on the taxes;the imports and exports across the world. The government has to look for
the appropriate sources for generation of revenue for the functioning of the country. Every nation has some of the wilderness
area available in their country which is debatable whether to use it or let it remain in the natural state.If we allow to
leave it in its natural place there wouldnot be much benefit to the government as well as the people, but otherwise we can
use in a resourceful manner and make good use of it.
Wilderness area like wastelends, barren lands, inhabitable areas, boglands etc. may come under this categories.
Various methods to earn revenue from these inhabitable lands can be from the land taxation, converting a barren land to
tourist spot and earning money from it ,providing employment, converting these wastelands to the wetlands to
tackle a raft of problems associated with the environmental issues. These lands are not used in useful manner but are
deteriorated day by day.
These inhabitable areas can be used to generated land tax value if proper taxation policies can be made and implemented.
For example: any factions of people holding a land with no work being carried on the area has to pay the tax for destroying
the property or they have to sell it to the government if they have no utilisation of the land. An area cannot be kept vacant.
This will allow the govenrmnet to have a source of income.
Some of these areas can be of national importance as they may be holding highly valuable ancient and prehistoric features and
valuable information for the study of the history. For example: Indus valley civilization, the pyramids of egypts and many
more places. These areas required to be preserved and protected but at the same time can be used as a tourist destination and
a source of income for the govrnement and they can be prevented from being destroyed as well. These palces will also help to
genrated some daily wages for the nearby inhabitants through tourism and will also attract the attention of the government to carry
out more reforms in the area.
These areas can also be utilised to overcome some of the critical environmental issues like controlling the greenhouse gas
emissions (carbon dioxide , methane), if these lands can be converted to the the wetlands they can also help in regulating the floods,
they cna also help to reduce the heat islands in the urban areas therby maintaining the temperature over the city and so on.
Therefore,these benefits from the wilderness areas can be of high importance to the nation and can becoem a great source of
income as well as environmental crisis protector. Some may be using these lands as the dumping sites and may have changed into the
landfill sites, thus it would be benefical if teh government take the control over such lands and utilisie them efficently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
A nations economy largely depends on the taxes;th...
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Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ioning of the country. Every nation has some of the wilderness area available in their cou...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...t or let it remain in the natural state.If we allow to leave it in its natural pl...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leaving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: leaving
...remain in the natural state.If we allow to leave it in its natural place there wouldnot ...
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Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a resourceful manner" with adverb for "resourceful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s the people, but otherwise we can use in a resourceful manner and make good use of it. Wilderness...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...good use of it. Wilderness area like wastelends, barren lands, inhabitable ar...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ble areas, boglands etc. may come under this categories. Various methods to earn re...
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Line 8, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd taxation, converting a barren land to tourist spot and earning money from it ,...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... tourist spot and earning money from it ,providing employment, converting these w...
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Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ting these wastelands to the wetlands to tackle a raft of problems associated wit...
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Line 18, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ble ancient and prehistoric features and valuable information for the study of th...
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...ization, the pyramids of egypts and many more places. These areas required to be ...
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Suggestion:
...can be used as a tourist destination and a source of income for the govrnement an...
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... as well. These palces will also help to genrated some daily wages for the nearby...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...the attention of the government to carry out more reforms in the area. These a...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arry out more reforms in the area. These areas can also be utilised to overcome ...
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Line 25, column 46, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... areas can also be utilised to overcome some of the critical environmental issues like cont...
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Line 26, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...greenhouse gas emissions carbon dioxide , methane, if these lands can be converte...
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Line 26, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ane, if these lands can be converted to the the wetlands they can also help in regulati...
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Line 26, column 72, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ane, if these lands can be converted to the the wetlands they can also help in regulati...
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Line 29, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
...e over the city and so on. Therefore,these benefits from the wilderness areas can ...
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Line 29, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... nation and can becoem a great source of income as well as environmental crisis p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96348884381 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76804153857 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492900608519 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.756168821 60.3974514979 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.944444444 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3888888889 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.97078651685 523% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241265438201 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822113727804 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514646124469 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757698556138 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480388611343 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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