no field of study can advance significantly unless it incorpoates knowledge and experiencee and experience from the outside that field
Human beings in earth are of different interest that they want to explore in the field of their interest. There are sundry of filed to study as the nature is vast it self: as people interest are different and way of thinking is also different. In my opinion, every filed of study are interconnected with each other. i have my own premises : increase the horizon of knowledge, strengthen the conclusion, and overall development of nation. i will be explaining these points on this essay by providing the support of it.
First of all, there are various filed of study in the nature and they are studied by the human beings as per their interest. one filed of study has great influence on other field which increases the horizon of the knowledge. For example, any researcher is doing his research the one the physics on the topic effect of radiation on the human beings. As a result, this study is imperative that medical student should know about it. in hospital, x-ray is done: the negative effect of the x-ray are known by physicists because doctor knows only the biological phenomena not about the physical phenomena so they need to cooperate in order take care of patients. hence this shows that physics is imperative to biology.
secondly, a particular person is export in any particular filed; although there seems lacking in confidence in some aspect. For an instance, if one person wants establish the construction company for that needs sundry of employee such engineer, administrative staff, advisor and so on. with cooperating with he cannot run the company. the aim of the company is not own profit and for that it is necessary to have expert from thae different filed and knowledge from different field .
in recapitulation, no field can advance without support from the knowledge and expert from outside. in order to improve research and applied in the field which is imperative to human life. there is rapid development in the development of nation if they cooperate which results in the welfare of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90406976744 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70530266352 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505813953488 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6709545402 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7222222222 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18068229966 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582347944897 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936504804941 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119734558554 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762846610599 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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