university requires variety of course
university is like temple where teachers are like god: they shows the right path in order to condign the goal by their erudition. In my opinion, university students should take variety of courses of the outside field of study in order to ensure that student become truly educated. I fell this way due to the three premises: to establish the social relationship, to adopt everyone in different predicament and engender the multidimensional manpower. I will explain this all arguments with perfect model in order to reinforced the premises and draw a logical conclusion.
First of all, university is place, which is responsible for every student enrolled there: they have to prepare the policies in order to avoid conflict of student in case of opting major subject and their relatonship with other subject . I would like to put forward that university student should take varity of subject in order to establish good social relationship. For example, if a person had masters in physics and he talent to : assume that he is topper of the university. When he enters in his professional life- he started teaching in college- has made his frustrate because students don't obey them, he don't know the way of teaching. He doesn't have idea to make lesson plan as it is one of the imperative aspect in teaching field. He does not speak with any other staff: when he speaks their would be row between the staffs, he do not know how to behave with student and staff. This seems that he do not know rules and regulation and moral education. Its fact that one physics students have not taken the outside course. So such types of problem are pervasive in all field which is due to reading only major subject not outside courses/
secondly, today’s university students are the pillor of the nation: responsible person of the nation. Students from the sundry field has to work in their own field. For an instance, doctor has to work in the hospital; examining the patients is not only his duties; however he has to know how to deal or behave with patients. Patients are of different kinds: they have different habit and doctor should be friendly with them. For this a doctor must have the knowledge related to moral education and also the rules and regulation in their field. This enhance the veneration and seems as competence doctor. If he would not have such knowledge then he would not be able to adopt in his field.
Finally, if a student has took variety of course then he can do different work in the same place or same time. For example, if a teacher working in university knows different language the he can well come the foreign guest as result university should not hire another language teacher for short time. If the student are interested to learn different language they it will be easy for them. If the teacher working in university knows chinese language: university has to sent one of the delegate from his university to chinese university then there would not be trouble. This is the big advantage of student who took variety of courses outside the field.
In recapitulation, each and every major course has nexus with other outside courses; which very important in our daily life and student has to realized it. Thus, I strongly believe that opting variety of courses will enhance in the socila relationship, creat good environment to wok and engender the multi- dimesional skilled manpower. Which is the need of every country for prompt and efficient development
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, of course, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2885.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 595.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8487394958 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93888872473 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61365796655 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435294117647 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 915.3 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1063636354 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.851851852 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.037037037 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92592592593 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172124244642 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511740700502 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731220614745 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121520072355 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853772644627 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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