true success can be measured primarily by in terms of the goals on sets itself
People have different goals according to their interest and they feels success, when they reached to the goal they had sets for oneself. people have their own perception for defining the success; but, I have my own perspective regarding the goal and its achievement. in my views, goal is fruition when i makes the plan and do labor as making plan which makes me happy, personable and responsible person in my nation.
first of all, every people has to work hard to reach the goal: they have to make plan, policy and run according to it. first things we have to noticed that what is the goal of life and that makes you have. For example, if someone has goal to be a doctor in future then started working had day by day. their might have obstacles that which may cause frustration in their file. avoiding the hindrance, he become a doctor which makes him happy. Further, he started to think to contribute in their society and this is due to success that he has got.
secondly, goal should be made as their interest which encourage to perpetuate in his career. people will not distract their mind on other field from their major file because they had fear that if they will do so then they might not get their goals. for an instance, if any person has sets his goal to be social worker; he would only think about how to do that work ? if some try to distract him from his aim then he will ignore it and continue his task. he is not attracted by other views because that would not give him satisfaction.
On the other hand, there may things that happen in the life: as people have sets the goal and they are not able to reach the goal because they may be many problem that he/ she might have faced. However, some goal are achieved by the fluke which also makes them happy and satisfaction which may also consider as the true success.
in recapitulation, i strongly believe that true success is one that is related with goal that one has sets for oneself which makes happy and satisfaction in the life. Nevertheless, every goal sets oneself might not be achieved which has to distracted in the life and sometimes there is inadvertent which also makes people success in their life and motivate the junior to move ahead with hard working.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...ls according to their interest and they feels success, when they reached to the goal ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... to the goal they had sets for oneself. people have their own perception for defining ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...regarding the goal and its achievement. in my views, goal is fruition when i makes...
^^
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...t. in my views, goal is fruition when i makes the plan and do labor as making plan wh...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...and responsible person in my nation. first of all, every people has to work hard t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Their
...re then started working had day by day. their might have obstacles that which may ca...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d day by day. their might have obstacles that which may cause frustration in thei...
^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Avoiding
...ch may cause frustration in their file. avoiding the hindrance, he become a doctor which...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...s is due to success that he has got. secondly, goal should be made as their interest ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'perpetuating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: perpetuating
... made as their interest which encourage to perpetuate in his career. people will not distract...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... encourage to perpetuate in his career. people will not distract their mind on other f...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...so then they might not get their goals. for an instance, if any person has sets his...
^^^
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... only think about how to do that work ? if some try to distract him from his aim t...
^^
Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...e will ignore it and continue his task. he is not attracted by other views because...
^^
Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...e to reach the goal because they may be many problem that he/ she might have faced. However,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... also consider as the true success. in recapitulation, i strongly believe that...
^^
Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stracted in the life and sometimes there is inadvertent which also makes people s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51105651106 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30588151927 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452088452088 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2137952368 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180648813417 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689124541557 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561375017146 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127204408741 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454042861954 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.