No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your

Extrinsic knowledge and experience are crucial for advancement of any particular field ? The author claims so, I concede with the authors view. However, this advancement of any particular field of doesn’t only depend on the incorporating extrinsic knowledge and experience, rather on many other factors such as fundamental works, working on finer and specifics of that field and other factors such as socio-economic impact of that particular field.

To succeed in any field of study, it is imperative to get a great understanding of the fundamental basics of that field and they a play a key role in further development of that field. Let us consider the field of quantum physics is still very new and its fundamentals itself were not very lucid to the scientists. So, there is not point for people working on this field to incorporate knowledge from other areas of physics as it will be quite different. Strengthening the fundamental understanding of the quantum physics is crucial to its advancements.

Furthermore, with advancements in the knowledge in any particular field there is also increase in the complexities of that particular field. The more we learn in the about our body the complex it is becoming to understand. So it is highly imperative to have people to with in-depth knowledge into one specific field. To treat various alignments of our body we need various speciality and the ability of the doctor to treat a specific alignment in the body depends on his or her speciality in that the field. So, the success of an ophthalmologist depends on finer and detailed knowledge of the eye rather than other organs.

However, sometimes it interdisciplinary collaborations yield greater results and help in the precipitating the advancements. As discussed earlier it is important for an ophthalmologist to collaborate with a physicist and understand physics in order to develop diagnostic tools. These diagnostic tools tend to help the ophthalmologist in diagnosing the disease earlier and there help the patients better.

In conclusion, the advancements of a particular field depend on many factors. It is important to get the understanding of the basic fundamentals right and also go into the finer aspects of any particular field in order to advance in that field. However, often having experience and knowledge of other fields also helps in the success and speedup its advancements.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'fundamentals'.
Suggestion: fundamentals
...portant to get the understanding of the basic fundamentals right and also go into the finer aspect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22680412371 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28043934667 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430412371134 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7920798397 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2049662646 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756581230262 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060280931584 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125180757354 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527804814895 0.0667264976115 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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