Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Are we not responsible for the global climatic changes due to our life style and energy consumption patterns ? I feel as individuals we should take up the responsibility of our environment and preserving it. However, not only at the individual level strong determination should also be shown from the government and society at larger.
First of all, there is an increasing amount evidence coming up to show that there is a large amount of damage created to the environment because of the human activites. There is already a large amount of Ozone layer damage because CFCs which are used heavily in many of the home appliances such as AC's, Fluroscence lights and Refrigelators and so on. However, with the increasing evidence of impact of CFCs on environment many countries are creating awareness among people to not to use these products and banned these products containing these chemicals were ever possible. Many new alternatives have also been developed and people at individual level should start using only environmental friendly products.
Secondly, people should also reduce there energy consumptions and start using renewable energy resources where possible. Most of the automobiles now a days use petrol which leads to lot of pollution and this pollution causes environmental changes at subtle levels leading to changes in the global temperatures. In the recent past there has been evidence that the average temperature has gone up and this raise in global temperature various climatic distrubances and causing inclement wheather conditions. Untimely cyclones and hurricanes and other natural disators taking many human life and causing economic loss. So people at individual take up the accountability and start using the more environment friendly energy resources such as compressed natural gases and solar energy.
On the other hand, Industries are one of the major cause for environment damage. So in order to control the industries Government should take up firm policies and action to protect the environment. For instance when a power generation plants are licenced for power generation the government should place checks and ensure that the pollution from the power generation is treated well to make it harmless to the environment. So it is the responsibility of the government to see to it that the industrial damage to the environment is minimized.
In conclusion, each and every individual as well the goverment are responsible in conserving the environment and saving it from the damage from human use. Individuals should take up a conservative approach and start using renewable energy resources . Governments should enact stringent environmental policies to safe the environment from the industrial impact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41121495327 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04656133458 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469626168224 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4998614956 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.894736842 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16266797073 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552314395581 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520678587819 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927916101583 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496756538231 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.