Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
With advance technology and human population growth, the world’s production of waste has also increased. Every day, from the factory and the house, a lot of waste comes into nature. If the government doesn’t manage this, nature will be destroyed over time and will not stay for future generations. Government can come up with proper management and education to people and managers, give the proper solution to prevent produce rubbish waste.
one of the ways that the government can focus on and manage it is separation of garbage. Separation waste can keep environment cleaner. all people should be aware that their wastes should be segregate. On the other hand, separation waste from household help that each kind of waste transfer to the right place. such as , in Ireland, the system of waste separation begins from each house, and there are four small kind of trash can in the kitchens. Wet waste, recycle waste, plastic waste and compose waste.
The government can also prevent the production waste that is harmful for environment. The plastic is non-biodegradable material and it never get decompose and make environment polluted. For an illustration the government can illegal using plastic bag in all stores and instead of using fabric bag. It will help to keep environment clean. Although all people in the world should to keepsafe of environment because the next generations need that. We don’t be equanimity to environmentalist because this is trust for us and we have to keep it safe with right using materials being trusted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 252.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23015873016 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93788912122 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2407326801 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.375 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106296655332 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036041488574 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389135221719 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739399100779 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235313778368 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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