The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a Batavia newspaper.
"The department of agriculture in Batavia reports that the number of dairy farms throughout the country is now 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. During this same time period, however, the price of milk at the local Excello Food Market has increased from $1.50 to over $3.00 per gallon. To prevent farmers from continuing to receive excessive profits on an apparently increased supply of milk, the Batavia government should begin to regulate retail milk prices. Such regulation is necessary to ensure fair prices for consumers."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The author stated that the price of milk in local Excello has increased, where dairy farm throughout the country is 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. He/ she suggests for controlling of price dairy government should being to regulate retail milk prices. I strongly agree with author’s suggestion for some reasons.
First, if the government monitors the price that the consumer pays for milk, the consumer will pay the right price for dairy. Undoubtedly, with increase price of milk the price of all dairy’s production will increase. On the other hand, the price of milk will effect on other production that related to milk.
Secondly, if the government has to come up with a comprehensive and enforceable plan to solve the problems of livestock breeders and dairy factories. In addition, government supports of dairy factories and supersive the price of livestock product will help people to have milk and other dairy products in their basket. If price of milk excessively increase many people can’t be able to buy this product that is rich of vitamin D and calcium and would be necessary for body and it will harm to next generation.
The details that author has mentioned along with supporting evidence are more through and convincing and we know a convincing argument will change the mind even if it be skeptical for audience but in this article the writer had been able to bring a logic reason to cogent her/him audience.
All in all, this memo based on a palpable issue that with a logic attitude the resolution can be find out that one of that is government’s protection of consumer’s rights.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 276 350
No. of Characters: 1311 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.076 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.75 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.578 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.221 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.405 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.707 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... the other hand, the price of milk will effect on other production that related to mil...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir basket. If price of milk excessively increase many people can't be able ...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...rgument will change the mind even if it be skeptical for audience but in this arti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 2260.96107784 60% => OK
No of words: 275.0 441.139720559 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96727272727 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83593003679 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9185397432 57.8364921388 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 119.503703932 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.70786347227 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865188776225 0.218282227539 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436703071145 0.0743258471296 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872728599586 0.0701772020484 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540616905541 0.128457276422 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672275854408 0.0628817314937 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.3799401198 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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