Only once one has known real sadness can one feel true happiness
Life bring you different occasions including positive and negative outcomes and how you face these shape your character and attitude in general. You may stay strong steadily or you may come over with some few damages after all. To some extent, deep sadnesses and depression are in capable of harming your brain cells, accordingly, they inhibits you being positive, joyful individual by means of hormones due to these traumas. In my opinion, sad situtations make you stronger, more able to appreciate your belongings and give you a lesson of life by showing what you have now and what can be worse in future.
Since you have seen both sides now, you can analyze more clearly, additionally, you can figure out the difference between real sadness and manipulations. People are not able to understand true values of something without losing it. For instance, David Shanner, an early indolent person, have become joyful, enthusiastic after defeating cancer. This evet has changed his life in a way that he wants to use this opportunity and want a life worth to live. During this period, he has discovered his real happiness is seeing the world and decided not to postpone it anymore. This illustrates that real sadness provide you an opportunity of seeing truth of losing your light and energy and encourage you to discover your real wills, fears and joys immediately.
In parallel with these, emotion of fear of loss is a great incentive for many successful and active people. A person has overcome an accidet in which all her or his family can die put more importance to have time with them from that time. Fear of loss help you understand real value of happiness, being together and healthy, appreciate what you have.
In addition, seeing what can be worse is a way of understanding sense of appreciation and gratitude. These are unforgotten many times and they are immutable precursors of self-happiness. For instance, many Buddhas first teach these feelings for self-peace. They simulate worst situtations to their students and they remember those times and give higher value to their happy times
On the other hands, depressions, strong sadnesses can transform you into a melancholic person so that you see everything from a negative point of view, accordingly, this hinder you from finding real happinesses advertently. Many well-conditioned people focus on their bad times cannot recover themselves and get stuck into dark thoughts with spreading these to their environment. As a result, they become alone, start to blame everyone and things get worse. Hence, sometimes it is good to take professional support in these situation, how you recover is really vital.
In conclusion, all things considered, recognizing real happiness roots from real sadnesses, thus, you should focus on learning from your mistakes, accidents and unfortunate cases and analyze them elaboratively in order to get strong and take necessary actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, hence, if, may, really, so, thus, well, after all, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2468.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17400419287 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82738894053 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 774.9 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3243250985 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.523809524 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09523809524 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114727144816 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353884494575 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372104146627 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065497475786 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304155161475 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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