"Only once one has known real sadness can one feel true happiness."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Every single person in this world goes through many problems and sufferings during his or her lifetime. It is at this point of time, people experience extreme sadness. The prompt states that, true happiness is a feeling which can be unlocked only with the key, called sadness. It means that we can only feel true happiness once we live through the acme of hardship. In my opinion, i strongly agree with the prompt and support my place by stating two reasons.
Human life is ever-changing, and that is a good thing. If a person a is affluent, has everything he needs in life and has nothing to worry about, then life might come to stasis for him or her. When life is going through many undulations, we come to experience both sadness and happiness. The true worth of our life is only understandable when we experience extreme sadness. For instance, if a person was rich and affluent, but due to loss in business, he lost all his possessions. During poverty he shall realize how well he lived his life before he came to the streets. After recovering from his poverty, the person shall be grateful for his life and that's when he would experience true happiness. Happiness is relative, only during sadness shall we experience its true form.
We all would have heard of this famous quote, "No pain, No gain". It is in fact true. In order to achieve success and ultimately experience happiness in life, we must go through a lot of pain. Being in a competitive world, we have to work extremely had to receive the pleasures of life. For instance, Dr. A.P.J Abdul kalam is a well-known character for everyone. He came from a poor background. He had to work hard to pay for his college fees, do part-time jobs and study at the same time. But this stint of suffering lasted only from some time in his life. Due to his hard work, he gained a good job opportunity and he eventually became the president, while experience many successes. People find happiness when they make success in life. But to do that, it is necessary that we pay the price for it.
One might put forth the fact that, people like saints have attainted happiness by leading a simple life and that reduces the hardship they face in life. But one has to look into the fact that they have sacrificed the pleasures that a normal human being would experience and attained this sainthood, which itself is sadness and hardship in disguise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rson shall be grateful for his life and thats when he would experience true happiness...
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...leasures of life. For instance, Dr. A.P.J Abdul kalam is a well-known character f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66276346604 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56678532934 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487119437939 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5660826774 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5769230769 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4230769231 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11538461538 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887186668821 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291912798136 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419729453025 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715585904526 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457296624538 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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