"Only once one has known real sadness can one feel true happiness."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Sadness, happiness, anger, resentment etc; are the various emotions a person goes through in his life, inevitably. A widely known fact, Life is a amalgamation of various emotions. I believe in the notion that the real happiness can be felt by a person who has been into hardships in his life,
To begin with, life always has counterparts to an action. One can appraise light only if he can observe the darkness. Similarly, a person can feel the coldness only if he or she has once been into hot conditions. The ebullience of a success can be savored only if there person has been through failures. For instance, consider the case of Thomas Alwa Edison who invented the electric bulb after thousands of attempts. The success did not come to him at the first place itself, rather he has been failing numerous times to invent the bulb. He was able to enjoy his innovation only because he knew the taste of a failure. Thus, if anyone wants the real success in life, there must be failures.
Secondly, consider the example of climates which change over time very frequently. After going through the summer climate, there will be winter or cold season. Thus, to acclimate to all the conditions people usually use Air conditioners during summer and heaters during winters. If a person living in the cold continent of Antarctica is brought to the hot, torrid and sultry environment in the Asian parts, he can enjoy the heat more compared to a person who has not accustomed to cold climate. Thus, in this case, the lack of heat has facilitated the person in colder regions to savor the heat.
In contrast, however there are certain instances where people find happiness through the sadness. In other terms, though sadness is certain, they do not consider it because they concentrate only on the result of happiness. To buttress the above statement, consider the example of a mother giving birth to a child. She goes through excruciating pain while delivering the baby, but that does not seem to her as a negative connotation or a sadness because every mother in the world goes through the hardship of bearing the pain just because she knew that a great moment is going to happen in her life. Thus, in this case, we cannot link the sadness to happiness.
To conclude, life of a person can be compared to roller caster where there are dips and highs. Only after going through declivity, a person can feel the inclination. Similarly, a person been through the hardships can enjoy the real success. However, there are certain instances where we welcome the sadness because of the fact that we are certain about our success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nevitably. A widely known fact, Life is a amalgamation of various emotions. I bel...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o has been into hardships in his life, To begin with, life always has counterpa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cannot link the sadness to happiness. To conclude, life of a person can be com...
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Line 9, column 308, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
... instances where we welcome the sadness because of the fact that we are certain about our success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, while, for instance, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78414096916 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54512058758 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486784140969 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7920426565 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984882087385 0.243740707755 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328201159969 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291177161716 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572432838595 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018827091155 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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