As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement

In recent days there is no doubt that the world has changed recently due to wide advancement in all the life sectors. And people has started to depends more on using technology to solve all the issue they face it in their life. However, some people argue that this dependency on technology makes the ability of human kind to think for themselves worst and more deteriorated than the past. In contrast, some people think using technology makes the life more easier and better than the past due to vast reasons. On one hand, and from my point of view a strongly agree with the second school of thought for a lot of reasons. To substantiate my case this essay will illustrate my reasons to elaborate my preference.

To begin with, using technology became a indispensable part of our life's, and we can not solve any issue without using the technology. So, the first and the foremost reason comes to my mind is that, because the shape of the new issue and problem has changed from the past so the old solution will not work, hence we need different methods of technology to solve our problems in effective manner. For example, a new disease we need a new method to discover all the disease aspects, how to solve it, and how to make a good treatment plan for any new diseases.

Moreover, the second vital point should be taken into consideration using technology makes the life much easier that the past because it present all the problem aspects. Furthermore, it save our time and effort. For instance, facing any problem by using proper technology will analysis the problem and present all the possible solution and will let you to think effectively with the best solution by this way will save your time and effort.

All in all, while some people think rely on technology may seem bad idea because they think will worse the people thinking toward solving their problem, I think using technology widen the people thinking and increased their attention for every single details may will fit the best solution.

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Average: 5.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'depend'.
Suggestion: depend
...life sectors. And people has started to depends more on using technology to solve all t...
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Line 1, column 453, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...e think using technology makes the life more easier and better than the past due to vast re...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... To begin with, using technology became a indispensable part of our lifes, and we...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'presents'?
Suggestion: presents
...fe much easier that the past because it present all the problem aspects. Furthermore, i...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
...ll the problem aspects. Furthermore, it save our time and effort. For instance, faci...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sible solution and will let you to think effectively with the best solution by th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, no doubt, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73789173789 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45250333483 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495726495726 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6239165003 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.923076923 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 5.21951772744 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234917707969 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843614302914 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706786675865 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144547830022 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524279574652 0.0667264976115 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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