As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
technology has advanced to a more complex level. In the olden days, television was owned by rich people and it was in very few homes. thinking of watching movies in a device smaller than the television was far away from the truth. it has been possible in the form of mobile phone because of the innovations happening throughout the world. this would not have been possible if humans ability to think had deteriorated. As it has been rightly said, " necessity is the mother of all invention". humans are never satisfied with the things around them and this prompts them for a better discovery. The following serves as best examples to accept the fact provided in the first paragraph. From the man of history who discovered fire to cook food, to the man of the 20th century ordering food online. From making ticket reservations by standing in the queue to easily booking tickets in the internet. From the black and white tv to the colour led tv that people watch. From socializing by means of organising parties to social networking sites like Facebook, Twitter, etc. From sending letters to friend and relatives to sending greetings through whatsapp. All the above serve as best examples to prove that as people rely more and more on technology, necessity arises and this ultimately leads to the ability of humans to think more and make new discoveries. As a child is inquisitive, wanting to know the happenings around him, adults are also on the verge of knowing and finding more. if the issue stated by the author was correct, then car would have been invented but airbags and sensors would not have been discovered for safety precautions. similarly, buildings would have been constructed, but rods to absorb lighting would not have been discovered. similarly during natural calamities, preventive measures would not have been taken. A person moving in the flight would not be provided with safety jackets. if humans thinking ability had deteriorated, then medicines to cure epidemics and new diseases would never have been found. Thus, in conclusion, I would like to reiterate the fact that, necessity has made man to think and this has in fact led to the growth of technologies. As the negative side of this technological devices increases, man finds an alternate way to subside it. So as long as need arises, to solve the problems, he will keep thinking and thinking to achieve whatever his need be is met.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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technology has advanced to a more complex level. I...
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...o cure epidemics and new diseases would never have been found. Thus, in conclusion, I would lik...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, similarly, so, then, thus, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89537712895 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70264941323 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4857392007 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.4782608696 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8695652174 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08695652174 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21818874308 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547274006139 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809070348717 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21818874308 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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