TPO-18: students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends
Society is comprised of people who have an influence over another individual in terms of making decisions suitable to lead a comfortable life. children are influenced mostly by their parents, teachers, relatives and peer group. I disagree to the fact that students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
children from the age of four tend to spend most of their time in the school listening to teachers and their friends. Since friends are at the same age group, they tend to be influenced by them. For instance, young kids often fight with their parents to get for them the same design of clothes, stationary objects and meals that their friend brings to school. Also, talks about movies and hero worship begin from a young age.
Moreover, even as they grow, the peers have a major role to play in choosing academic courses and a professional career. Nowadays, many youngsters follow the path of companions and hence opt out from Medicine or Engineering studies which was the field selected by their parents. Instead, they tend to pursue not so common professions like photography and arts just for the sake of their peer group members. even though, parents and teachers might advise them on this, they turn a deaf ear to them.
Furthermore, college goers experience dilemma and a different outcome of behaviors due to close acquaintance with friends. career path and personal life takes a turn and lead to adverse effects due to the above said reasons. they never realize the mistakes early and once they do so can only regret about it as the damage would have been beyond repair.
To put in a nutshell, the facts can be reiterated that, though elders could guide students in the right track they don’t seem to heed to the advises of older generations and thus could end up facing difficulties in life in the near future, as friends are more influential than anybody else in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
Society is comprised of people who have an influence over anoth...
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Suggestion: Children
...ns suitable to lead a comfortable life. children are influenced mostly by their parents,...
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Suggestion: Children
...ir teachers than by their friends. children from the age of four tend to spend most...
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Suggestion: Even
...r the sake of their peer group members. even though, parents and teachers might advi...
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Suggestion: Career
...due to close acquaintance with friends. career path and personal life takes a turn and...
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Suggestion: They
... effects due to the above said reasons. they never realize the mistakes early and on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88449848024 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50611174477 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613981762918 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7755820728 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31223333757 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106517998379 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149776730245 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164743985808 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135882034931 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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