Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
The given argument, albeit seems reasonable at the first glance suffers from major flaws which is not evident explicitly. For a cogent flow of ideas, the author has provided persuasive details, which if not treated may result in severe complications with regard to the administration of inoculation.
Firstly, it is specified that innumerable lives would be saved if people are vaccinated for cow flu in a routine way. but there is no adequate detail regarding the proof of its outcome and whether it has been tested previously or not. Since there is a possibility of side effects for any kind of medication, which in some case will not be evident, proper investigation is needed to find out the positive effects rather than the negative one.
Further, it has been specified that continuously giving the dosage could lead to the death of few individuals which is better compared to the myriad life that could be lost due to cow flu. but what the author fails to take into account is that nobody has the right to play with the life of people which is considered a boon bestowed by God. moreover, instead of taking risks, government can take effort to find alternate measures to curb the flu. they can discuss with the leaders of other nations regarding the spread of the disease and out ways to curtail it. if it a new disease for which remedy apart from the mentioned inoculation is not been discovered, then researchers could be intimated about the ill - effects and in turn they could be asked to find a medicine without harmful effects, so that all the lives could be saved.
moreover, even if such efforts prove futile, steps must be taken to allow the healthy people to migrate to a different place at least till the end of the menace, wherein the life of the people not yet affected by the flu could be saved.
To conclude, the above facts could be iterated that unless and until, proper solution has not been found out, people are at the risk of two things:Either it could result in their death or it will lead them to be affected with some other type of harm for which there may not be a cure. Therefore, keeping the above factors in mind, an immediate solution is the time of the hour.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 392 350
No. of Characters: 1765 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.45 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.503 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.421 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.726 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.394 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.749 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... has provided persuasive details, which if not treated may result in severe compli...
^^
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a routine way" with adverb for "routine"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ed if people are vaccinated for cow flu in a routine way. but there is no adequate detail regard...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 419, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...accinated for cow flu in a routine way. but there is no adequate detail regarding t...
^^^
Line 1, column 932, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...life that could be lost due to cow flu. but what the author fails to take into acco...
^^^
Line 1, column 1084, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...h is considered a boon bestowed by God. moreover, instead of taking risks, government ca...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1190, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ind alternate measures to curb the flu. they can discuss with the leaders of other n...
^^^^
Line 1, column 1577, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
..., so that all the lives could be saved. moreover, even if such efforts prove futile, ste...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, apart from, at least, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 391.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60869565217 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52380250448 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53452685422 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.8473053892 131% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6806501667 57.8364921388 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.615384615 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0769230769 23.324526521 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.70786347227 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162296534279 0.218282227539 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559310255742 0.0743258471296 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574868560129 0.0701772020484 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162296534279 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 12.5979740519 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.1389221557 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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