Schools should do more to prepare them for the non academic aspect of adulthood
school is the temple of life. After home, it is the sole responsibility of the school to mould an individual into a better citizen for the future. so, a school plays a crucial role in the betterment of a student and to shape his/ her future. A school should not only concentrate on the academics but also inculcate good values in an individual. it should also include extra curricular activities like sports, yoga, dance, aerobics, music, etc. A student may have interest in different aspect of life. One may be good in academics while others may be good in non academics. To find out the talent in an individual and to drive him into that area of interest, it is very important that schools should do more to prepare them for the non academic aspect of adulthood. In a class of 30 students, at least 40% of them may want to pursue their career in non academics. To quote a few - Sachin Tendulkar, PT Usha, Sania Mirza, etc. A boy or a girl's talent should not be suppressed from an young age. many parents who want their children to become doctor or an engineer try to burden them with huge loads of study materials. many of them who are forced into an academic career without interest only end up in getting arrears or backlogs or think of suicide due to stress. do it is very important that true talent is recognised to forward things and this could be established only at the school level. so, schools should strive hard to see to it that they mould the kids not only academically but also to find out their hidden talents by introducing and preparing them towards the non academic aspect of adulthood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51546391753 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54883803771 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53264604811 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.915852167 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41853582713 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123121682697 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143268409511 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.41853582713 0.150359130593 278% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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