People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The technological advancement has resulted in the comfort of human beings who wants to enjoy the luxuries of life. Contrasting to earlier periods where many people were uneducated, nowadays most of the parents send their kids to school. thus, in the past children did the same job of their parents. However, the trend is changing. Youngsters feel that personal enjoyment is a priority in comparison to the tasks that lay ahead of him. Therefore, I concur with the idea presented in the statement.
way back in the olden days, farming was prevalent in most of the states of a country. children right from the young age understood the difficulty of reaping a harvest and the complexity of getting a single grain as a food. But this is not the case now because they are not even aware of the procedure involved in the making of a food. According to them, it is enough to go and purchase from a nearby store or book it online to get it at his/ her doorstep. Failing in such intellect does not prompt them to hear their parent’s words of asking what to do in future. As a result of this, they tend to look for job of their choice which interests them and easy for them to do.
kids, twenty years back did not have the privilege to access mobile phone or laptop whereas in modern days, one can witness children aged 3 years and above fully engrossed in playing and watching games and cartoons. Also, they prefer photography and a chance in acting or directing movies rather than professional jobs like engineering or medicine.
Further, people are prone to get stressed easily due to mechanical way of living, where both parents opt to go to a job. In such cases, they spend more time on personal enjoyment, without even taking care of their kids, to relax themselves free from the professional tension and stress. So, they feel it as a stress buster.
thus, to conclude, we can sum up the acts that, with the techniques readily available at everyone’s disposal, humans tend to allocate more time for personal mirth and happiness in order to avoid the tension of everyday chores of their career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus
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...complexity of getting a single grain as a food. But this is not the case now because t...
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Suggestion: food
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Suggestion: in the future
...arent's words of asking what to do in future. As a result of this, they tend to look...
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...ests them and easy for them to do. kids, twenty years back did not have the pri...
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..., they feel it as a stress buster. thus, to conclude, we can sum up the acts th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61163034216 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595687331536 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2209464009 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145031616341 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378874151887 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412425478485 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066276299246 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290993911096 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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