Professors are normally found in university classrooms, offices, and libraries doing research and lecturing to their students.
The reading passage and the lecture compare and contrast certain details about the professors giving academic talks on the television. On one hand, it is treated as a reputation for the professor whereas on the other hand, it is considered not to be beneficial to anybody.
The passage describes about the reputation of the professor appearing as guests on television programs which is beneficial not only to the university students but to the general public as a whole. this is contradicted in the lecture by saying that such professors are not called for meetings and are not allowed in conferences as they view education as a means of entertainment.
Furthermore, it is stated that universities have benefit by a professor attending TV shows as it is talked very highly about the university by the general public which in turn leads to the reputation of the university. this fact is contrasted by implying that a lot of time is wasted by the professor on rehearsals, travel and makeup. So, instead of worrying about university and students, they waste quality time.
Moreover, since television is a mode of communication to every individual on earth, viewers tend to get expertise and insight from professional talks. Nevertheless, TV’s are known to offer only academic titles rather than in depth lecture lacking in intellectual substance.
To put in a nutshell, the facts can be reiterated that professors waste time and money for unnecessary programs showcased in the form of academic talks. such time can be spent fruitfully with fellow colleagues or students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...y to the university students but to the general public as a whole. this is contradicted in the...
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Suggestion: This
...s but to the general public as a whole. this is contradicted in the lecture by sayin...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...very highly about the university by the general public which in turn leads to the reputation o...
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Suggestion: This
...ds to the reputation of the university. this fact is contrasted by implying that a l...
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Suggestion: Such
...howcased in the form of academic talks. such time can be spent fruitfully with fello...
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Message: Use simply 'colleagues'.
Suggestion: colleagues
... such time can be spent fruitfully with fellow colleagues or students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22178988327 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06109223922 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533073929961 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3972615962 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154976290126 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059564121759 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303768408815 0.0662205650399 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082429828935 0.162205337803 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382328932284 0.0443174109184 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.7273730684 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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