Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. education prepares a student to face the challenges that he/she is going to face in the long run. So it is very important for the educational systems to offer the students with greater exposure of the outside world. In this regard, I agree with the given argument that colleges and universities should make the students to spend at least one semester to study in a foreign country. this could motivate and shy off their tendency to mingle with their counterparts belonging to diverse sectors.
upon careful examination, one can know that this practise is being carried out In many nations. I wish to cite an example from the college where I studied. There was a program called as the student exchange program which required exchange of students from the foreign countries with the students of India for a greatest period of one semester. even though it was a girl's college, by means of the exchange program, 3 boys got the chance to study in our college. it was very beneficial in terms of sharing of cultures, knowledge, language and mannerisms.
Alternatively, in view of the above example, we can feel that opportunities could be given for course exchange as well as student exchange which could foster more insights. An exchange in a particular course, such as, music, foreign language, or any relaxing course for just one semester could even lead to gaining additional input to include in the the course of one's life.
Further, to work upon such benefits for the sake of students, many issues need to be taken care of by the educational bodies in terms of fee structure, housing and taking care of their personal basic needs. it is the duty of the colleges and universities to which the students migrate to fulfill the demands of the person since difference in money or the culture varies from place to place and from nations to nations.
we can draw the conclusion based on the above referred facts and ideas. To introduce a new formulation whereby students get to spend a semester of study in a foreign country is a good idea provided the basic needs of them are met in a suitable way. Similarly, institutions could think of more creative ways to give the students with an expire to a different land for gaining insights and get to know of the varied cultures and traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, well, at least, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81927710843 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67345678316 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501204819277 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9921962573 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.647058824 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421759973583 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147271826087 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.251986593731 0.0758088955206 332% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209448076852 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200005418933 0.0667264976115 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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