Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
governance and laws were made for the people in order to get benefited. In olden days, during the rule of kings, laws were meant to be useful for the royal family. To enjoy the luxuries, kings used laws in such a way that those of the inferior rank were degraded. A better government has been set up so that people could lead a peaceful life. Imagine the pitiable state of women had the sati act not been passed? we would have witnessed putting an end to their life at a very young age. most of the problems faced by people in the society has a solution owing to the rules and regulations of the government. keeping in mind the safety of passengers, rules enforcing the use of helmet and seatbelts are being laid down. At the same time, efforts are taken to make india a green nation by stressing the importance of keeping the city clean and litter free. However, there aren't laws for each and every need of the society. For instance, there is no law emphasising the need to save water. it is the sole responsibility of an individual to make sure that he doesnt waste water. According to the words of William Wordsworth " water, water everywhere but not a drop to drink" people of india are truly in need of an abundant water supply. Eventhough no laws have been formed for this purpose, it is the duty of every citizen to abide by it snd save the most useful resource of the world. In addition to the above, there are many problems faced by the people which cold not be enforced in the name of laws. so, instead of waiting for a judgement to be passed, ensure that we make use of the best facilities available to us rather that forcing things through laws. A nation's biggest strength are the people living in it. Hence, they should strive hard to preserve the flora and fauna. In order to conclude, I use the fact that many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system and the reason behind it is that we cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds. Moreover, a solution to the problem is achieved through self cautiousness instead of somebody else forcing or thrusting upon us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Governance
governance and laws were made for the people in or...
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Suggestion: We
...women had the sati act not been passed? we would have witnessed putting an end to ...
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Suggestion: Most
... end to their life at a very young age. most of the problems faced by people in the ...
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Suggestion: Keeping
...ules and regulations of the government. keeping in mind the safety of passengers, rules...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...y clean and litter free. However, there arent laws for each and every need of the soc...
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Suggestion: It
...law emphasising the need to save water. it is the sole responsibility of an indivi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...y of an individual to make sure that he doesnt waste water. According to the words of ...
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Suggestion: So
...ld not be enforced in the name of laws. so, instead of waiting for a judgement to ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: A nation; Nations
...ather that forcing things through laws. A nations biggest strength are the people living ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'nations the biggest'.
Suggestion: nations the biggest
...her that forcing things through laws. A nations biggest strength are the people living in it. H...
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Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forces'.
Suggestion: forces
...f cautiousness instead of somebody else forcing or thrusting upon us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46272493573 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38383056137 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54498714653 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2905385916 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220415619325 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060871034052 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988141081745 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220415619325 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.