Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The speaker claims that many problems of modern society can not be solved by laws and legal system because he believes that laws cannot change what is in peoples hearts and minds. I concede both the claim and the reason of the author for three reasons.
Every society is bound by rules and regulations but that does not mean that no problems exists in the society. Every society face the transgressions although abide by laws and legal system. The criminals mind always finds the way out of the legal system. For example the problems like rape, murder and other criminal activities are prevalent in each and every society despite being abide by the laws.
Moreover, Laws and legal system differs from place to place. The activity categorized as against legal system in some country might not be the case for transgression in another country. For example, in some countries homosexual marriage is not legalized where as in most of the states in USA homosexual marriages are equally celebrated as heterosexual one. The problem here is not solved by strict rules and regulations against homosexual marriage, but strict rules exacerbated the problem.
Additionally, though being abide by the laws and order most of the people in the people in the society acts upon their own minds and hearts. For example, gender discriminations is a crime in Nepal, while daughters and sons are not equally treated. In Nepal traditional people believe that having son is blessing of god and daughters are generally aborted illegally. Though, the act is not legal people commonly aborts daughter which is because of their belief and thoughts which can not be easily eliminated by the legal system.
In sum, laws and the legal system is basically maintained to solve the problems in the society and to some extent problems are solved by the legal system, Nevertheless only laws and order maintenance is not sufficient for problem solving, change in peoples mind and hearts is more important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'faces'.
...ms exists in the society. Every society face the transgressions although abide by l...
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...s in the society. Every society face the transgressions although abide by laws an...
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHERE_AS
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
...es homosexual marriage is not legalized where as in most of the states in USA homosexual...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01215805471 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61152779419 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3806901538 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365674643777 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119363919305 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125772124753 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229416364983 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13607119496 0.0667264976115 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.