The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In the world that we are living, people from diversified backgrounds exist. they together form a society which comprises of men and women irrespective of caste, creed and religion. For the upbringing and growth of the society, it is very important for everyone to lead a peaceful life in order to avoid arguments and unnecessary fights. this is possible only by instilling in the young people, a sense of co-operation and not competition.
Right from childhood, parents and teachers strive hard to teach children values of life so that they will grow up as successful citizens of a nation in turn leading to the growth of the world. Small kids could be taught about leadership qualities by fostering a sense of involvement in their day to day activites. according to the saying, "Today's kids are tomorrow's future", they are the one's to lead the country after they are big and hence it is mandatory for them to be with good qualities like honesty, politeness, genorosity and belongingness, which could pave way for a fruitful and advanced universe.
Further, competition only leads to ill effects. For example, if marks are given priority rather than development of knowledge, then it could lead to the destruction of the society as a whole, since it will give rise to ego problems in young minds which is very difficult to erase as time progresses. Similarly, the attitude to cheat in examinations will be increased. Further, failure in exams could prove fatal as many instances of suicidal cases are witnessed in the recent years.
Nevertheless, government is taking steps to curb such defects pervasive in our society. Past two years topper's list are not published in newspapers and it is not being highlighted in news channels. As a result of which, the concept of competition is declining to a greater extent. Also, instead of marks, many schools and colleges, adopt the grading system in order to inculcate the value of fostering learning among the students.
Furthermore, an adult should have a leadership quality in order to sustain the growth of the institution and this is possible only by being good to his/ her colleagues. On the other hand, competition could in turn lead to the downfall of the individual and the organization. if an individual co-operates with his other team members, then together they would yield better profits according to the saying, "United we stand, divided we fall"
Thus in a nutshell, the above facts can be stated precisely that, competition should be in the minds of all in order to achieve greater targets and move to a higher level rather than to create an ill - effect in others. governments, parents and teachers should lend a helping hand in such endeavours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, then, thus, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2280.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01098901099 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92617744293 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545054945055 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.3098521706 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9473684211 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139615513947 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365320734498 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484563708174 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663500698865 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665810655486 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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