Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
A society comprises of people belonging to a particular community. Based on the above issue, we can identify a society as one that relates to the members often surrounding the children. this could be a child's parents, grandparents, relatives, peer group or teachers who have a very vital role in the upbringing of an individual. children's talent and specific traits are keenly observed by them.
special talents are God's gift bestowed to an individual which could range between singing, dancing, sports, gymnastics, swimming and athletics. if a child has a very good voice, then from a very young age, she can be put into music classes to improve her musical skills. similarly, a child interested in sports activities could be trained in that particular direction.
trainings should be started from a very young age to get the desired results. transitions in the voice a person happens during the adolescent stage. Before that transition, if the voice is correctly tuned for an inclination to music, then that child could be in a position to sing any kind of song without any difficulty. similarly, a child's physique or body is flexible at an early stage. After crossing the teenage, it becomes a mammoth task to make the body flexible either for aerobics or dancing or enhancing the gymnastic skills. so, the body should be fine tuned at an early stage of development.
When it comes to developing the talents of an individual, parents should be willing to spend enough money for the child's growth as well as keep on motivating them. Parent's or teachers should make arrangements to make sure their active participation in all levels of competition beginning from school level to international level. if this is done perfectly, then their future would be intact and these children with special talent could even making it their career.
Greater importance and valuable time should be spent in developing the talents. At the same time, studies should also be given equal importance. The reason is cited in the following example. My uncle was a tennis coach. he guided and coached his son in the same field. Many accolades and glories filled his life but it was ephemeral. Even though he achieved a lot, when it comes to sports, retirement comes at a very young age. so he began thinking of what to do next. In spite of becoming a coach himself, he could not get the required money for his living. As a result, he had to undergo several hardships.
so, it is very important that, kids with special talents need to be trained from a very young age to develop their talents. if this is accompanied by an average level in studies also, then they could achieve a very remarkable place throughout their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, well, kind of, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88528138528 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7131333124 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549783549784 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.574558056 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6071428571 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10714285714 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306941749129 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699616195665 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061245903608 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151340143281 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483675735592 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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