People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
people are of many types. One set of humans lead a reticent life unaware of the things happening around them. They have a selfish attitude towards life, never taking risks, and hence are comfortable leading a peaceful and serene life. family and friends are a priority which enables them to be cautious in every walks of life. On the other hand, few of them take life as a challenge, as it is their nature for some and few others do it for the sake of money, and face the future, ready to boldly face the risk that lay ahead of them. The argument throws light on the second category of men for discussion.
many parameters need to be considered when agreeing to the above issue and I believe that in every circumstance, risky action taken only after the careful consideration of its consequences will not lead to research and growth. In the technological field of advancement, only a simulation is possible rather than an actual feat. But it cannot give a clear picture on the reality and hence people take risks in order to achieve mammoth tasks. For example, scientists in the field of space exploration need to go to space in order to explore the stars, planets and galaxies. astronauts foresee the danger that lie ahead of them when taking a journey to space. Sunita Williams, the renowned astronaut could not have achieved fame, had she been hiding under the veil of the consequence of death that she had encountered on a space mission. Her risky action motivated the young astronauts to take up the challenges of the future without considering its consequences.
Similarly, according to the saying, “young minds achieve great tasks”, we can witness many things in our day to day life. many of them undertake risks with the knowledge of its consequences owing to personal needs such as money. For instance, in movies, dupes are made ready instead of heroes to do action sequences. The dupe knows he is risking his own life in such endeavors. The thought of the consequence would not have allowed him to take up such a career in life. hence, he prioritized his family and personal needs for the sake of earning a good income by taking risks.
Moreover, today’s kids are seen copying in the exam without even feeling scared or repenting for the wrongdoing. A simple example as this is enough to consider the fact that, beginning with kids to the adults face the life if great challenges await them. Also, young adults who are flamboyant, to attract girls, do bike stunts aware of the consequences of breaking a limb in doing so.
Thus, to conclude it can be stated that various factors are involved while judging the issue. some of them take risks due to their adrenaline rush whereas others do it for personal gains. technological progress demands taking risks which cannot be avoided. Nevertheless, in situations which demand the safety and precautionary methods, it is suitable to adhere to the needs. The use of intellect will help in choosing the correct strategy for adopting and meeting the demands of certain rules laid down for individuals to be safe and sound.
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... individuals to be safe and sound.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, similarly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2600.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 533.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87804878049 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66625185828 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534709193246 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 810.0 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5837672016 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2962962963 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7407407407 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163717869114 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433051727871 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373778772139 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834331567172 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361548343976 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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