The sale of fossils
The passage offers description about the private collectors, who sell and buy fossils thus making it to be a profitable venture. However, the professor refutes the theory and offers evidences claiming that fossils are readily available for purchase thereby providing greater exposure for the general public.
Firstly, it is stated in the reading that public is deprived of seeing fossils, by the private collectors, which could make them less interested. Also, if the fossils are displayed in the museum, it is likely that many persons might view them. On the contrary, the lecture disagrees and conveys that fossils are readily available for purchase which could prove beneficial for low level schools and other organizations.
Secondly, since wealthy fossil buyers spend limitless amount of money to acquire the rarest fossil, scientist may miss the opportunity to conduct research work and come up with great discoveries. Furthermore, competing against the millionaires who buy fossil is a herculean task. This is contradicted by the professor stating that any fossil will first pass through the lab test by scientist before reaching the hands of the buyers. hence, a perfect detailed examination is thoroughly undergone before it is destined to reach the collectors. Therefore, there is nothing that the scientists are to miss.
Thirdly, the claim of the fossils getting destroyed or overlooked by the buyers is proved false in the lecture by implying that many fossils go undiscovered and hence the fossil collectors destroying valuable scientific evidence is not true.
To put in a nutshell, the above facts can be condensed that inspite of the buying and selling of fossils, it is indeed beneficial to the general public and scientists as indicated in the lecture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...reby providing greater exposure for the general public. Firstly, it is stated in the read...
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Line 9, column 434, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...efore reaching the hands of the buyers. hence, a perfect detailed examination is thor...
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Line 17, column 138, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...fossils, it is indeed beneficial to the general public and scientists as indicated in the lect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37722419929 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81459792415 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9940083626 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06452816374 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489520157882 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162138115982 0.0996497079465 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818200008956 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247133314066 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661431291482 0.0443174109184 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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