People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
there is a famous saying," To err is human". To support the above said statement, it can be further added that, decisions taken without logical thinking would be a hasty one. The reason being, during an adrenaline rush, a human being forgets himself and blurted out due to different kinds of emotion. so I fully agree to the statement that people who make decisions based on emotion and justify those emotions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
By citing a relevant example, I would like to clarify it. if a couple is arguing over a simple topic and if both gets frustrated and start throwing tantrums, there is a greater chance for them to end up breaking their relationships. At the same time, when a person is very much happy about something, there is a chance for him/her to make huge promises which , he/she may not be in a position to fulfill.
Recently, when Tamilnadu's chief minister passed away, her immediate successor, instead of being compliant to become a chief minister gave the resignation letter thinking that people might not accept him. But, his decision taken emotionally only led to the downfall of the people of a state. Nations are not developing due to the leaders hasty decisions whereas homes are tearing apart due to the wrong decisions taken by the head of the family. due to this, citizens and children's are getting very much affected.
Once, a decision is made, it is practically impossible to correct it logically. think of those doing research and in the scientific field. In the event of a discovery, if scientists don't prove results logically, then think of the state of us living in the world? What is the assurance that their discovery is genuine? Every product is purchased by customers hoping that the product is a beneficial one. In an emotional state, if any employee had mixed an unwanted item, then think of the fate of the millions of people consuming the product. so, it is very important for an individual to think logically and with due patience before taking any kind of great decisions.
God has bestowed human beings with the sixth sense so that he can think. Man is the only animal who can distinguish between good and bad. Such a person should think at least twice before taking a decision. The outcome should be prophesied and decisions made accordingly so that it would favour all.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate the fact that any decision made after proper reasoning and logical thinking would yield better results for the benefit and growth of self and others surrounding us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, may, so, then, whereas, at least, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86136363636 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63089955099 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7556793998 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1304347826 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73913043478 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25474988196 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661311715234 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113776014676 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124180270313 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889610072402 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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