Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A society comprises of people belonging to diverse community, caste, creed, culture, language, etc. To avoid conflicts, a unique rule is been laid and the individuals expected to abide by them. Thus, a government government was created which is for, of and by the people. Many heed to the laws enforced and others protest.
In olden days, Indians practised Sati, that is, a wife has to throw herself in the burning ritual of her dead husband. similarly, dowry was given to the bride by her father. but, as days progressed, in-laws tortured the girl's family by demanding more. We can see that till the end of the 20 th century, atrocities against women were more prevalent. To set women free from the social evils, laws were framed for their own safety. this has led to young girls being independent and safe. Also, capital punishment served as a menace. By framing laws, these types of injustice were put a full stop.
There is no law called as just or in just. it is in the minds of people who look at it. For example, wearing helmet was made compulsory by the government. Some men who preferred safety was happy with that law. girls on the other hand took it as an issue against their fashion. similarly not wearing seatbelt and drunken driving are the major issues faced by the government. young lads are not in the position to heed to those requirements. Their parents money and freedom to do whatever they like have made them blind to the just laws.
Few more examples include the increase in GST tax issues and the hike in petrol and diesel prices. The government of a nation, when it runs short of revenues, collects money from the citizens in the form of taxes. other ways could include raising the price of commodities. this becomes a hardship to common middle class man, whose income remains meagre. His salary remains the same whereas his expenditure keeps on increasing manifold times. At these instances, the laws seem like an unjust law for him.
Recently in tamilnadu, government banned jallikattu, an age-old traditional sport. At that time, people came forward to show their protest in a non violent means. they gathered in the marina beach, lit candles and showed that they want to take their traditional values to posterity. Immediately, the government of tamilnadu withdrew the law imposed.
In conclusion, it can be said that, it is the duty of the government to impose laws on their citizens. To abide by them, is people's responsibility. but, if they feel that, the law imposed is unjust, they can always voice their opinions. it will be better if that protest is done in the non violent way that that " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Mahathma Gandhi of india set as an example to get india' independence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uals expected to abide by them. Thus, a government government was created which is for, of and by the...
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...ted which is for, of and by the people. Many heed to the laws enforced and others protest...
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...re is no law called as just or in just. it is in the minds of people who look at i...
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...clude raising the price of commodities. this becomes a hardship to common middle cla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, similarly, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86929460581 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77088417444 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597510373444 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3272579516 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0294117647 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.02941176471 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912374891658 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214024589573 0.0831039109588 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287726617853 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449977224712 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220128959769 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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