Today it is clear that our increasing use of technology has caused more harm than good for mankind.
With the advent of technology, man has made his life much simpler. In the olden days, men stayed in caves and ate the flesh of animals. As days passed, he learnt to make fire and cook food. he also started building homes for him to live. he designed his necessities and worked towards achieving it. Thus, we could see that as need arises, ideas are formed and new things are invented. every creation has its boon and bane. every person must see to it that he uses the technology within limits and enjoys its advantages and not its disadvantages.
first, let's look at the uses of technology one by one with valid examples. The scenario today in most of the homes differ in a way that people buy food and clothes through online shopping without wasting time at the shops. Nowadays, cars are fitted with airbags and sensors keeping in mind the safety of the passengers. similarly, machines which are used to clean dishes and wash our clothes have made physical strain much lesser. Moreover, in early days, people used to stand in queues for hours together to book tickets. Recently, online ticket booking facilities have reduced waiting time enormously. Grandparents could communicate with their kids and grandchildren who are settled abroad through video chat. any kind of information is at our finger tips because of search engines like Google.
However, technology has its own drawbacks. children are the first ones to get addicted to video games and messages sent through the social networking sites. A greater possibility of kids getting affected could be noticed. similarly, social bonding is rarely witnessed among people ,since they don't even find time to spend together. For instance, in a family, even though the members are physically present in their homes, we could notice the mother watching serials in the television, father glued to his laptop or computer or phone owing to office related issues whereas their kids busy playing online games. Such a scenario is very common in every household.
Nevertheless, an opinion about the progress in technologies being viewed as good or bad lies solely in an individual. Anything would prove to be fruitful, if it is made use of within limits. it is the duty of parents to restrict their children and teach them moral values to lead a better life. similarly, it is the duty of the higher officials to make sure that their citizens are using technology within the set boundaries.
To summarize the above said views, it could be noted that any invention has its own advantages and disadvantages. early man suffered due to lack of resources. But with the availability of huge resources, it is a big question whether we are using them in a better fashion or not. To make the better use of it lies entirely in the hands of an individual. if a person makes use of technology in a good sense, then he will be benefited which in turn could lead to the benefit of the nation. Therefore, let's benefit from it than being harmed by it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2476.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81712062257 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58266412384 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558365758755 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4845039733 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.375 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03125 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154200776692 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332686952051 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375761307189 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801620927137 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355261799863 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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