Today it is clear that our increasing use of technology has caused more harm than good for mankind.
Technology is a boon and a bane in todays world. With the rapid growth of technology our attraction to them has been ever increasing. In such times technology has some ill effects yet the advantages overpower its disadvantages.
It is a common sight nowadays of youngsters glued to their phones oblivious of their surroundings. The phone has become the centre of our lives in which a day without the cellphone would be a nightmare. Our overdependence on technology has hindered our capabilities to perform basic tasks. Calculations would force us to use a calculator nowadays and the language has taken a turn for the worse due to messaging jargon and abbreviations. All of these ill effects and yet technology has done more good than harm.
Technology has expanded all areas of the society. Long distant communication with people miles apart yet are virtually near. The internet another brainchild of technology has connected billions of people around the world. All worldy information can be accessed in a matter of clicks.
Additionally, technology in the field of medical sciences has led to paramount discoveries and researches about the ailments of the human body. This has led to decrease in the death rates over the years. Technology has helped to advanced the instruments in this field for example the edison machine which allows surgeons to be performed surgeries in the scale of micrometers without the direct contact of human beings. These machines can also be used remotely from expert surgeons around the globe. Human prosthetics has rightfully given a new lease of life to people with physical disabilities.
In conclusion moderation is the key and technology too in the rightful use can be a boon to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
... them has been ever increasing. In such times technology has some ill effects yet the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 285.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10877192982 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01237827959 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554385964912 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0786244498 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8888888889 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226993921786 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650661248191 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666152711662 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115396630633 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646140150303 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.