Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
government has been set up for the people in order to ensure safe and peaceful living on this earth. Human beings, in general, tend to oversee the hurdles and are imprudent of their future despite the advice rendered by the elders from time to time. if rules are not laid down or restrictions imposed, then one could witness a deprivation of safety in our day to day lives. For instance, recently the government mandated the use of helmets and seats belts imposing heavy fines for those who don’t adhere to it. however, people fail to realize that, imbibing proper rules could lead to a safe living. The same applies to the field of scientific research and development.
The growth of a nation is mirrored through the vast advancement in the scientific and technological side, which is possible only through the scientists of that country. As India’s former president and scientist Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam, rightly pointed out, “By 2020, India will be a developed country”, it is evident that, according to his visionary statement, science is the need of the hour. With the innovative ideas that men could offer, novelistic creations can occur. For example, in olden days, manual cars were prevalent. But nowadays, automatic cars with the latest technologies and safety measures are inserted within the framework of the structure of the car.
Nevertheless, if restrictions are not laid down, then it could lead to the destruction of that nation. The best example is the Hiroshima and Nagasaki nuclear attacks. if the scientists, who had found out the destructive side of nuclear bombs had concealed its features from the outside world, then the attacks that had led to the destruction of the two provinces without leaving a minute trail of life, could have been avoided. Had the government checked the activities of the people in and out of the research community, such an explosion could have been nullified.
Moreover, with the advancement in the field of science, plagiarism and forgery of patent rights have taken a mammoth size. Also, co-ordination among the members of the scientific group is missing to a greater extent. only, rules, regulations and proper code of conduct, along with moral ethics and values will result in the betterment of the research organization and in turn resulting in the overall growth. Furthermore, funds could be utilized in a wrong way pertaining to research activities. Money would be wasted in boondoggle. There will be no fear in the minds of the people and hence the tendency to commit crimes will increase. All this intensifications are reduced by governmental laws and the citizens abiding by it.
Thus, to conclude, it can be reiterated that even though science has its own discretions, a proper monitoring could give fruitful results. Today’s youngsters are freelance thinkers and precocious, who never mind about the dangers that lie ahead of them. men are tuned to behave in such a way right from their childhood and the reason behind it is their inquisitiveness. however, adopting proper methods and following certain rules will surely avoid them to fall into mishaps.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2645.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1359223301 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85435836469 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 797.4 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7770972927 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.730769231 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8076923077 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65384615385 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099358339065 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284041437701 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536562107234 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500940076075 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415010667792 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 100.480337079 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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