In 21st century, technology is omnipresent in our life, and we are over relying on it for performing our mundane chores. Given statement relates heavily dependence on technology negatively with human cognitive and analytical ability. Greater exposure to technology is surely deteriorating man's thinking ability because humans are using brain lesser and lesser for performing daily activities.
Firstly, overuse of technology is degrading human computational and decision making abilities due strong influence of smart devices on such processes. Currently students can not perform basic mathematical calculation without using calculators. Currently travellers can not find their destinations without using GPS devices. Above all are indicators for loss our computational and decision making abilities.
Furthermore, technology is also causing some negative impacts by creating new century challenges for our civilization. Overuse of conventional fuels for generation of power generation, for transportation is resulting in pollution. This increasing pollution is creating new age problems such as global warming. Increase in usage of cars is also causing traffic. Increase in penetration of connectivity and internet is opening new cyber security front. Crimes related to cyber frauds and privacy is increasing day by day. Hence, high exposure to advance technology is causing very deep rooted problems for humans which may lead to our future generation.
Finally, technology is also reducing our social skills due to extra indulgence in social networking sites. Now a days, humans are spending numerous hours daily on social networking sites. This is limiting their face to face contact with communication with other people. Therefore, there is less awareness about social skills such as eye contact, listening, face reading, and understanding others emotions. It is also reducing sense of community within people. Due to overuse of technology, humans are spending couple of hours daily alone leading to lack of social skills.
In conclusion, there are more shortcomings of technology compared to its strength for normal man. So, we need to use technology more thoughtfully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... indulgence in social networking sites. Now a days, humans are spending numerous hours dai...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ulgence in social networking sites. Now a days, humans are spending numerous hours dai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79813664596 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07039843554 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9384009466 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.8636363636 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16200518679 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435904985766 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446143337386 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957202030641 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053785579399 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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