People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making
Human behavior is constantly influenced with the intrinsic and extrinsic factors, depending majorly on the larger part that impacts life. The stimulus to bring about behavioral change varies according to the individuals; however a concrete claim cannot be made support the cause. There are many underlying facets which shades and shapes human behavior development, adjustment and improvement.
First of all, it is a universal claim that an individuals’ trait is directly linked with the genetic constitution and the prevailing environment. With regard to this, a child born in a criminal family will automatically dialect into the mafia world and learn its acting phenomena. The homely environment that favors such tradition will nurture the thinking along with the behavioral development thereby leading into the world of crime. This particular situation can be thoroughly regarded as the legacy and tradition which can also be seen into the lives of royals and some business tycoons.
However, behavior is self developing trait which improvises with time and need, negating the fact of external influence and effect on its development. For example, Mahatma Gandhi, the initiator of non violence campaign against British India, was a child belonging to the high ranked family residing partly in London and in India. The Spartan life he choose to emancipate from British colony is still a tale to talk about, something which has shaped the map of modern time and that changes the fate of the geography for many countries. His dedication for liberation was his self making to promote on land as he could have chosen his father profession of being a merchant and living a luxurious life to its fullest. It’s the self indulgence which generated the way of non violence leading directly to the door of freedom, subverting the unjust.
As such is the contribution of an inner self which constantly warns the conscious to choose the right. The case can be explained with the same criminal family where continuation of the legacy is a mere misconception of superiority while supporting the cause of justice and respecting life is of utmost value is analyzed with the so called heir or descendants. Their behavior was ought to be guided as per the environmental impact instead they are motivated to follow path that justifies peace and betterment and this perspective can be a consequence of self making, self evolving and self understanding.
To sum up, behavioral change do have external forces which guides it through time and space, perhaps these forces are not compulsorily be the only reason for it. The various facets of behavioral adjustment have other influencing terms and values including self awareness and own making.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...ondon and in India. The Spartan life he choose to emancipate from British colony is st...
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Line 3, column 843, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...door of freedom, subverting the unjust. As such is the contribution of an inner se...
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Line 4, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is of utmost value is analyzed with the so called heir or descendants. Their beh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, while, for example, first of all, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21136363636 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85933208262 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565909090909 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0401946615 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.882352941 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8823529412 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105319269493 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337289817045 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380554247916 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673990213094 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518156227059 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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