There are certain rules in this society that everyone should follow. But one has total control of oneself. Behavior can be influenced by people among us but not forced. So, I disagree with the statement that “people’s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making”.
In the society we live in we observe and get inspiration from many leaders and rules. We intend to take suggestions from greater people and will be willingly tend to follow them in our daily life. A wise man once said “our Behavior changes from our mistakes” one should be able to control ourself and lead a pathway to next generation ones.
Celebrities are the most influential people in this word. By taking them as an example how they got their success. We should be able to gain some good from their journey and make our own journey. We learn a lot from our school. Our teachers and parents thought us morals and ethics by taking good things from lessons thought to us one should me our own decisions.
On contrary, there are some people whose behavior is determined by people among them.one should be able to understand how to be good to others. Even though people force their opinions and dreams on us. We will be the one to decide. In order to survive in this society, we should be hold of our own behavior.
In the conclusion, people might force their opinions but we should be responsible of who we turn out to be. Our behavior should be of our own making.
- GRE ISSUE When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings 50
- Claim While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self satisfaction it should really be a source of embarrassment Reason Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation 50
- An international development organization in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A While seeds for this new type of millet cost more farmers will be p 45
- Claim While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self satisfaction it should really be a source of embarrassment Reason Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation 50
- People s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 282, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'held'?
Suggestion: held
...o survive in this society, we should be hold of our own behavior. In the conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61832061069 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47922432046 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519083969466 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5307281512 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2222222222 118.986275619 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.21951772744 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307107954003 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115798224406 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160266922354 0.0758088955206 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22264027624 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145353893677 0.0667264976115 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 14.1392134831 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 48.8420337079 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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