“People’s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.”Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compe

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“People’s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

A person is being remembered by the deed he does, A person does a good thing will be appreciated and remember in the positive sense while someone who does bad deeds will be remembered by it.

To illustrate, people has a full right to make their decisions and act according but sometimes people can't do. A decision may be wrong or correct but the intention of the people matter the most. Moreover, A small child never wanted to go in the initial stage, but parents pressurise a child to step out for school even a child crying or try to malinger because the parent knows the eminence of learning. In former case yes the child behaviour is largely determined by the forces, not of their own making. but Its for the benefit of the child. On the other hand, If a child is interested in sports and parents do not allow them to explore in the sports field, then whatever parents do, the child will never listen to them.

Further on this, occasionally we became lethargic, lazy and what is benevolent for us starting neglecting it. For example, going for a gym regularly, this is beneficial for our health, but try to procrastinate it for n number reason. To avoid this, we hire a gym trainer which will help to be regular in our exercise. In contrast to it, A ingenuous person wanted to be a bodybuilder, always contemplate about bodybuilding, does not need any stern person to check to keep a check on him. Mostly will be motivated by himself because he has a good to achieve. The guide is necessary to make him on track, to track the progress.

In contrast to this, Nowadays it's very banal to achieve a target or goal people starting making a capricious plot to get some advantage. For instance, In the banking sector, the salesperson is given target to fulfil like some x number of account should be open in this quarter years, x number credit should be sold. Probably, a common man goes for account open but doesn't take a credit card. Salesmen, on the other hand, issue the credit without telling the account holder in order to mee the quarterly target, which is wrong but in order to guard their job, the salesman does it. By this, we can't determine the person behaviour but he does this in peer pressure, but there are several other ways to get tackle this problem.

In conclusion, people behaviour is determined by the force, not of their own making.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and act according but sometimes people cant do. A decision may be wrong or correct ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...by the forces, not of their own making. but Its for the benefit of the child. On th...
^^^
Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... a common man goes for account open but doesnt take a credit card. Salesmen, on the ot...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 594, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... job, the salesman does it. By this, we cant determine the person behaviour but he d...
^^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t tackle this problem. In conclusion, people behaviour is determined by the fo...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56705882353 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55019749557 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508235294118 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1348418842 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.157894737 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10038326912 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398669586723 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480263180065 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743705465831 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499731905419 0.0667264976115 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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