People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.

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People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.

In around the world, there is various kind of authority. Some of them are very generous, some of autonomous or oppressive. Every authority has a legislative power to rule an individual institution. But, questioning the authorities’ action is significant for an institution than to accepting passively.
Firstly, take an instance, our country Bangladesh was dominated by Pakistani before 1971. In 1971 Bangladesh became independent. For independence, Bangladesh had to lose millions of people’s life. This independence achieve initiated by questioning the government action. Our great leader Bangabanghu Sheikh Mujhibor Rahaman opposed the action of Pakistan’s government because they deprived our country from the education sector, employment sector, industrial sector, military sector etc. When we protested their action Pakistani started repression to innocent people. At last, in 1971 Bangladesh achieved independence and this was possible because of questioning against authority.
Again, India had also this type of history. India was dominated by the British colony about 200 years. Their leader Mohan Das Gandhi rose to question against British oppressive dictator and he believed in non-violation. They protest intensely by not helping the British in any circumstance. Finally, the British had to leave India in 1947. All this was possible because not tolerated everything passively.
But, I think the government is not always done an evil task. For example, in our country, Bangladesh has a law that every child must go to school. Education for girls is free up to higher secondary level. If any citizen protests against this law it will be harmful to our future.
To conclude, always raise voice against the repression of the authority that relates to the future.

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Average: 5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s is free up to higher secondary level. If any citizen protests against this law i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, for example, i think, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62361623616 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12808500248 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1719535703 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2727272727 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3181818182 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.68181818182 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150489791245 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367386032139 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569196027583 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824488215325 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086178570204 0.0667264976115 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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