People should question the rule of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the reasons for which the statement may or may not be true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The above statement prompts that people should take actions against the unjust rules of an authority. Authorities are meant to maintain discipline and code of conduct in an organization. but, this doesn't mean that the authorities can act like dictators. I agree with the prompt and believe that people shouldn't accept any wrong acts performed by authorities and should take required actions against those acts.
Admittedly, authorities are created to ensure that a certain organization works in a required way and the people under follow certain rules. but, sometimes these rules and regulations become unjustified and the authority starts acting like tyrants. For instance, consider the example of North Korea which has been under autocratic rule for a very long time. people there are not allowed to perform their proper human rights like freedom to speech. any citizen that tries to oppose the government faces grim implications of their actions. if the people do not stand together as a group against the rulers, the problems will only exacerbate.
it has to be understood that the authorities aren't always right. A lot of the decisions taken by the authority are for their own benefits. consider the example of the colonial British rule over india. The british-indian government created reforms and rules that undermined the status of Indians and thereby strengthened their rule over india. any kind of remonstration by the people of the country was met by castigation from the government. It was only when, the people of the country understood that the authorities were working in an unruly manner, they started a unified protest against the government, which finally led to india's freedom. If people do not raise their voices against the unjust of the authorities, the power of the authorities will only strengthen.
Finally, a lot of the times, the authorities focus only on a specific part of their people and ignore or discriminate others. For example, under the Nazi rule, the propoganda against the jews resulted in the death of millions of innocent jews. Also, the "Apartheid" rule in south africa in the early 20th century massively discriminated against the Black community of south africa. Authorities are meant to treat all the people in an equitable manner. these rules were against the basic human rights and were outright wrong.
Although, the role of authorities are to maintain a proper environment that is safe and just for the people under them. it often turns into tyranny, which needs to be opposed. The unscrupulous activities of the authorities should be criticised and should not be tolerated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19953051643 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88369652669 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509389671362 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2893569494 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.04 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19874863478 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567960768051 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362508122192 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120706488038 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295705584759 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.