People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the reasons for which the statement may or may not be true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We are surrounded by authority figures in every aspects of our lives: at home , at school, at work ,even at church and some of us play the role of authoritive figures itself as parents, as teacher or as leader.These authorities around us are given along with the responsiblity of using it for the well being of those are being served. So it is important for people to question them time to time without any intention of forestalling the existing progress. To my opinion this standpoint can be analyzed and deliberated through case by case study .
To parapharase a maxim " absolute power corrupts absolutely";In retrospect there have been numerous examle where any authority that have continued to enjoy its power or reign without being impugned has
gone to peak of its atrocities ,exploitaion and corruption. like Nazi government ruled germany untill the second world war because the people never stood up against the authority in fear and blindly supported them. Raising the finger against the authority can bring a sense of realization in them about their responsblity for which they have been choosen for.Some poeple claim that Questioning the government or authority does not mean indulging in violent activity but this is not the case ,their can be both the violent as well non-violent way of to point them for example Mahatama gandhi weapon of non-violence played a
cruical role during India's freedom movement against the british government .
Further More, Benjamin franklin famously qouted that "questioning the authority is the first responsiblity of a citizen". It does not only bring the social change but also shapes the future events. Hence, it is the basic moral right of mankind not to tolerate and stand against if someone not doing reasonable to him or to the society. Today's for the people and of the people's soceity all over the world is rendering them with maximum opportunity to raise their voice against the ill-fuctioning of the authority.
However, there are certain situation in which questioning the authority may lead to hindering the exisiting progress , seggregation or stymeing the event that could bring the positive change. Considrering the case of india , the world's greatest democracy, where the directly people chooses their represtatives. Many development activities gets stuck because it does not pass the consensus of opposition. Many a countries accross the world have smoothen the process to directly or indirectly questioning the administration without the fear of being prosecuted or publicly humiliated by the governement for example freedom of right to speech or right to imformation act.
So to sum up, If we want the authority to function in a better way. We are liable to challnage them time to time without any intention of forestalling the existing progress.
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...ty for which they have been choosen for.Some poeple claim that Questioning the gover...
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...e their voice against the ill-fuctioning of the authority. However, there are...
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... positive change. Considrering the case of india , the worlds greatest democracy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, well, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2387.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24615384615 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02878050412 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.161812803 60.3974514979 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.1875 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4375 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 7.80617977528 564% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147755360394 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449899392061 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364686711981 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607744595467 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427286483985 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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