People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Decision making is a very important aspect of everyone's life.The decisions that one takes today determines what position one would be in the future.This makes it very necessary for one to think very carefully while taking any important decision in life as one wrong decision can lead to many sleepless nights in future.
Due to this importance regarding making decisions it is essential that they should be taken practically rather than emotionally.Emotions such as anger, envy, love, etc, may weaken a person's ability to take the right decision.So, I strongly agree with the author's statement.Consider a student who is being upbraided because of his mis-behaviour.The teacher who is scolding the student gets a bit personal and questions his upbringing by faulting his parents.This upsets the student very much and in a fit of rage he starts to abuse his teacher for bringing his parents into the argument.In this case the student let the emotions get better of him and took a wrong decision to argue with his teacher.Such an action on the part of a student can never be justifiable even if he says that the teacher got very personal in his remarks.Once he began abusing his teacher, he crossed all his boundaries.The better option in this case would have been to stay silent, let the teacher complete what he wants to say, then apologise and leave but for this it was necessary for the student to control his emotions.
However at the same time, there are certain places where it is always better to follow your heart and emotions.A student might be a part of a family where everyone is a doctor.But the student herself is not interested in pursuing medicine and instead fancies herself to be a great artist.In such a scenario one can argue that she should still pursue medicine because of the immense family support and help she will get and practically it would be a good decision, but inspite of all this will she ever be a good doctor when she has absolutely no passion for medicine and her interests lie solely in art? When facing such a conundrum it is always better to follow your heart.
On the whole I still believe that we must still exercise control on our emotions and make sure that we take into consideration the various results that we might have to face while taking a decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, then, while, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77889447236 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83366295032 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 23.0359550562 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 365.88817964 60.3974514979 606% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 380.4 118.986275619 320% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.6 23.4991977007 339% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8 5.21951772744 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139163329098 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688591176013 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778505782616 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860738970016 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780650211079 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.9 14.1392134831 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 48.8420337079 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 12.1743820225 270% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 11.2143820225 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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