People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The speaker asserts that people who make emotion-based decisions are poor decision makers. I completely agree with the author's assertion. People sometimes became sentimental and hastily make decisions based on their emotions. But, when they try to justify their decisions afterward with logic, their decision becomes poor because the decision was not made intellectually. I agreed with the author's claim on the basis of the following reasons.
Firstly, it's human nature that when people are driven by emotions they do not think of their future, they just do or decide what is emotionally right. But after, when its time to scrutiny their decisions, they try to prove the decision with the logic but logic doesn't support their decision because they are made based on just emotion. For example, A teenager is scolded by his parents because of his dirty behavior at home. Then, he becomes emotional and driven by these sentiments, he decided to leave home forever. It's his emotional decision and surely it is a poor decision. In this way, emotional sentiments leads to poor decisions.
Secondly, in the case of business, management, and market strategies, decisions based on the emotion always leads to failure. Suppose, you are a manager of a business company and taking an interview for appointing the employer. If the job seeker is very lacking in the qualifications needed for your business and cites his family's economic conditions and other emotional factors. Then, you select him based on your emotion, it will harmful for your business.
Lastly, there is popular saying that "always think twice before you decide anything" this quote also trying to say that if you are making any decision, think twice because it may be your emotional decision and will not contribute towards your goal. So, We have to use our intellectual and think of future consequences always before making any decisions.
In sum, based on the above-mentioned reasons and examples, It is clear that persons who make their decisions solely based on their emotions are poor decision makers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ion makers. I completely agree with the authors assertion. People sometimes became sent...
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Suggestion: , its
...he basis of following reasons. Firstly,its human nature that when people are drive...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...that when people are driven by emotions they they do not think of their future, they just...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e the decision with the logic but logic doesnt support their decision because they are...
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ts, he decided to leave home foverever. Its his emotional decision and surely it is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: cites
...ifications needed for your business and cites cites his familys economic conditions and oth...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , There
...ill harmfull for your business. Lastly,There is popular saying that 'always thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23423423423 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77056282381 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525525525526 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.014480415 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387975145419 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130255802145 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923811131561 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22732778708 0.150359130593 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997311291879 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.