People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
We take decisions about everything like watching this movie or not , buying this product or not in our day to day life. These decisions are mostly taken by our emotions and thus emotions take a vital role in taking decisions which can bring small as well as a drastic changes in our life. The thesis suggests that some people who make decisions with their emotions and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers, I do agree with this for following two reasons
God have given us power of thinking, we humans think for a particular situations and then react or make decisions appropriately on based on which decisions would be best for ourselves. We make decisions whether to go left or right on basis of where our destination is , we take decisions to watch a movie with reference what the movie is based on , whether movie is good or bad is judge on the liking and disliking of ourselves. All these decisions have common ruler which is our emotions.
We can differentiate a good decision maker and a bad decision maker on basis of what a person does after taking decisions and what factor he or she has considered in taking a particular decision.
For example A person who has obesity and has to make a decision to buy cheese or not , if that person purchase cheese regardless of other factors and just made decision based on emotion and then justifying that decisions with some logic afterwards that such as there was sale or discount on it , such person or people making decisions such are poor decision makers.
A politician liked to play golf thus builds a golf post , thus this decision of building making a golf post his emotion and liking played an emotional role in it but stating that he build this golf post for other political interest , this makes that politician a poor decision maker as we know that he liked playing golf and that's the reason he made that golf post and after stating that he build that for political interest makes him a poor decision makers
Thus decisions based on emotions are best but then justify others that there was logic after that decisions would surely lead someone to a poor decision maker.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68766404199 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46810346234 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42782152231 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 23.0359550562 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.141906029 60.3974514979 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.25 118.986275619 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 47.625 23.4991977007 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.21951772744 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.598296035572 0.243740707755 245% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.281014542701 0.0831039109588 338% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161030624838 0.0758088955206 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365444808862 0.150359130593 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130813260497 0.0667264976115 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 14.1392134831 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 12.1743820225 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.2143820225 185% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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