The use of water in six regions of the world in various sectors

Essay topics:

The use of water in six regions of the world in various sectors.

The diagrams compare the consumption of water in three different sectors, as industries, agriculture, and household for six distinct regions worldwide.

Overall, it is clear that Asian and African regions constitute the voluminous usage in domestic activities, while European and American contributes a major portion in agricultural and industrial usage.

Looking at the details, countries accounting for the highest of household water usage are Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia proportionally more than a quarter less to hundred. Regarding domestic usage, Central Asia contributes the highest with 88%. Furthermore, their industrial and farming contribution is just around 10% of the total usage, with South East Asia having a maximum of them about 12 percent for the manufacturing sector.

In contrast, North America and Europe registered the highest portion of usage in industries, with 48 percent and 53 percent respectively. In addition, these regions again account for the maximum in agricultural utilization of water, 13%, and 15% respectively.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67283950617 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10668786944 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1936483777 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.166666667 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10455837438 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566268546576 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556428336247 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745347723073 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587126913059 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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