People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Emotion's are like dual sword, they cuts both ways. The prompt implies, people who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decision with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. In my opinion, I loosely agree with the prompt. The process of decision making doesn't solely depends on emotion or logic but rather a wide range of factors besides both of those. We explain this by three examples.
At the beginning, emotions sometimes can be related to future outcomes and hence can give sometimes logical and valid decision in a whimsical situation. For instance, suppose there is a police officer who is sent to do some task. Later during compilation of that task the officer finds out the task is morally wrong. He chooses to listen to his emotions, acts morally and do not goes forward with the mission. Had he not been emotional at the moment, someone could have been hurt. This example shows us that is alright to be emotional sometimes. That emotion can sometime led to good decisions.
On the contrary, emotions can led to poor decision making. There can be equal amount of good and bad facts one can say about a decision. As said earlier there are various factors in the play while decision making but humans tend to be emotional all the time. For instance, in the previous example, there can be the case that the officer acted with emotion to make a decision and acted with greed in that situation. Sabotaging the main mission which would have been morally right in a broad sense. Later that officer can explain the decision by giving some fake or loose facts about the situation. Such as his life was in threat or the opposing party could have done more damage than this. So in this example we can see how emotions are not always good, they can be some times bad, greedy, envious. These emotions can cause some serious damage and should be kept in check.
Furthermore, emotions can sometime make us blind and provincial. For instance, an administrative officer who validates the construction of commercial building is faced with a choice passing a contract. He knows that if he approves it, that can cause some serious traffic issues in the town and if he doesn't he could lose money which he has invested in it. Faced by these choices he chooses the latter which gives benefit in short term but exacerbates the situation in long term. This examples shows us how emotion can led to purblind decision which will later cause the situation to be worsen.
In conclusion, there is no right or wrong in this. We all are humans and we all are influenced by several factors which include emotions and hence there is no correct answer for this. Hence process of decision making can be based on logic and reasoning but if one acts with emotion then it is not a wrong choice rather a different one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 494.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71255060729 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38736326351 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46963562753 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.672442164 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.275862069 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0344827586 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58620689655 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338094229736 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100430530904 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16300658268 0.0758088955206 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231553611453 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17700218712 0.0667264976115 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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