A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor
A person who knowingly commits a crime is said to be penalised since he has lost the right to benefit any civil laws. This must be implemented strictly by the government, so that others might avoid doing such crimes. So, I strongly stand by author's opinion.
If a person has a clear intention of what he is going to do and make such crimes ,then he must be strictly viewed because after knowing the effects, he does the crime. There is a suitable proverb supporting author's opinion, here it goes, "If a man eats salt, then he must drink water". Same way, if a man commits a crime ,he must be punished with suitable methods.
Crime may be due to various reasons, due to revenge, caste ,religion, gender discrimination . One such example is that, recently a man belonging to Bangladesh wished to marry a girl from other caste ,only because of this reason, the man and the girl were killed by their own family members and were cut into pieces ,How they can be so cruel by killing their own children. They have so much hatred towards other caste. They accepted the crime and were imprisoned for five years. My opinion is imprisonment does not make a man better ,so punishment must be taken to the next level.
Although it might be a small crime like robbery, chain snatching prominent punishments me given so that they won't repeat any such activity rather involve in a higher level crime.Once, a person commits a crime, he loses his identity in the world but he is enjoying all the rights as such normal person. So, the rights to them must be prohibited and they must be penalised in a way that other people by watching this must not repeat the same.The violation of any social act or policy is termed as crime .Crime is not based on their status in the society, may it be the elite or the backward classes, the punishment given to them is found to be the same .
So, hereby conclude by stating that a person who commits a mistake knowingly has broken the social contract and he can not have any civil rights and he is nor more called a Citizen .He must be refrained from such rights .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53421052632 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44247466688 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.6487433536 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234880867934 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883136598219 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117349425811 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16737807896 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101042106394 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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