A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
I don't fully agree that a person who knowingly commits a crime should not retain any civil rights or right to benefit from his or her own labor. Punishment should be proportional to gravity of the the crime committed, as not all crimes result to equal social unrest.
First, lets consider a person helping victim of a car accident. If accident had occured in a remote place where ambulance service is not available and the person decides to drive the victim to nearest hospital, he can break few traffic rules on the way. He can drive past speed limit, jump signal if there is no traffic or even swithch lanes frequently. Although the person is fully aware that not complying to traffic rules is a crime, situation demands him to break those rules. In this case it's unfair to punish the person without fully understanding the circumstances and to deprive him of civil rights would be an extreme measure.
Furthermore, if a homeless who cannot afford to buy food, tries to steal a little food from supermarket just to feed his/her children, is commiting a crime consciously. Situation demands for him to commit the crime. Loss of little food doesn't really make big difference to supermarket owner. Infact supermarket might be just discarding expired food, if no one buys them. Atleast in this case it is feeding hungry children. Although stealing is a crime, it should be punished considering the object being stolen and motives behind.
Lastly, just revoking civil rights or right to benefit from his own labour is not sufficient to terrorist inovled in mass shooting or bombing, they desereve to be punished with extreme punishment like life time imprisonment or hang till death. Even in this case punishment should be proportional to gravity of the situation.
Sometimes people commit crime being fully aware of the consequences, sometimes they will be victim of the situation and will br forced to commit it. Depraving them of civil rights will be extreme measure, Everyone commiting crime should be punished according to the crime they committed and impact it will have on society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96022727273 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66364581716 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5828395705 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.705882353 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47058823529 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356080297567 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113844952334 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17400447153 0.0758088955206 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236170033781 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20195248804 0.0667264976115 303% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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