A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
The author claims that a person who delibrately commits a crime even after knowing that its an illicit thing and does not supported by the ethics should be refrained from the civil rights and benifits by thier labor. The author's claim is true and hence we agree to it. Commiting a crime is never an option to anyone in this entire world and the person who knowingly commits a crime are more than just a criminal. Because a crime has been commited even after knowing that it's not ethically supported by anyone. Such persons does not deserve a place in the society and should not be given any benifits from the government because these person are ethically corrupted. They can cause a huge loss to the society and eventually are the danger to the society.
Commiting a crime is never really an option regardless how how bad the situation they are facing. There are Government bodies which a person can consult if they are going through such a condition, for example a Police station is always ready for the public help. A person can consult them and can tell them what problem they are facing and how it is forcing them to commit a crime and even if they are not getting help from such Government bodies then they can directly reach upto the higher authoritie and ask them for the help. A person who commits a crime and the one who is affected by the crime are both humans and there might be some reason that someone is forced to go upto this limit, so in such cases the Government should try to help such peoples.
In the society there are some ethics which everyone should be abided by and if someone breaks those ethics then should be castigated. A person who commited a crime is implicitly or explicitly harming the country's reputation and the it will be the Governments loss. For example, an article published last year in the national magazine stated how a buisness man absconded after he failed to repay the debts which he had taken. So from the example we can see that absconding was never an option for the buisness-man but it was his/her choice even after knowing that it will break the social contracts. In such cases that person is totally free but it is the government who is facing the loss.
So there should be strict rules that those who knowingly commited a crime should be abandoned by the society and they should not be allowed to get any benifits from their labor. If these rules were applied on the example stated above the situation could be resisted. After the first time when the business-man commited a crime if he/she would have been abondonded then such situation will never rises.
Whenever a person commits a crime not matter knowingly or unknowingly they should be chastised for the crime they have commited. If the crime seems more of the delibrated type then they should not be retaining any civil rights or the right to benifit from his/her own labor. If the society imposes such rules then only the crime rate can be controlled otherwise it will keep on increasing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
... that its an illicit thing and does not supported by the ethics should be refrained from ...
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Line 1, column 524, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'do'.
Suggestion: do
...cally supported by anyone. Such persons does not deserve a place in the society and ...
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Line 1, column 629, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
...ny benifits from the government because these person are ethically corrupted. They can cause...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: how
...me is never really an option regardless how how bad the situation they are facing. Ther...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...tly harming the countrys reputation and the it will be the Governments loss. For examp...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d to get any benifits from their labor. If these rules were applied on the example...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
Suggestion: had been
...business-man commited a crime if he/she would have been abondonded then such situation will nev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, really, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2470.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60820895522 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.362665235 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404850746269 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.0 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4961775343 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.619047619 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5238095238 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47619047619 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332471220891 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112604894615 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113766097743 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217163363899 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935362231216 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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