The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.

Essay topics:

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.

Recently, there have been a lot of discussions about health and whether it is going to

improve or not. In my opinion, I think that people will become unhealthier in the future than

they are now.

There are many reasons that support the idea of people becoming unhealthy in the future.

Firstly, one reason is that of food. People tend to eat more fast food nowadays. They tend to

treat themselves with sweets and chocolate whenever they want. This appears to be

because people are busier now than they used to be. So, people don’t have a chance to

cook or even learn the art of cookery. Also, having a lot of unhealthy food can lead to obesity

and it could be a serious issue in the future. Another reason is that technology is developing

everyday. Young people enjoy buying new gadgets and the latest devices. This has a

negative impact on their health, especially when they enjoy video games. Spending long

hours looking at a screen can lead to bad eyesight and obesity as well. Yet another reason

is that laziness is a big issue. Different forms of exercise might disappear in the future

because people don’t like sports. Also, people prefer spending most of their time on the

internet and the internet is growing every single day.

Other people might disagree and say that health will improve in the future. They believe

that new sports and new ways to exercise will appear in the future. However, I don’t think it

can happen since the majority of people spend less time outdoors. Moreover, other people

believe that technology will try and help people improve their health. For example, there

have been some games released on the Wii console that makes people exercise but

technology is developing more in a negative way. For instance, many phone industries are

developing new applications everyday and today’s generation likes to follow every trend.

This prevents people to go outside to exercise. They like to spend more time on the internet

downloading new programmes or reading gossips about celebrities. This affects people’s

health badly.

In conclusion, I believe that people’s health is affected negatively by fast food, technology

and sports and it will be a problem in the future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55076946996 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3326722515 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0384615385 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4230769231 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239497248839 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699246978341 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069053008212 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659982414155 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543054703486 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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