The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued by some that in the future, in all likelihood, there would be a decrease in the standard of people's health compared to the present. In my opinion, i partly concur with this notion.
On the one hand, chances are that people's health would not be as good as it at the moment due to two following culprits. Firstly, with the development of technology, people tend to overuse technology recently and ignore outdoor activities, which are beneficial for their health. Truly, there is a rise in priority spending hours on browsing the web, fiddling with mobile phone or prolonged watching TV at home, in lieu of going outside and taking up manifold positive activities. Secondly, on the account of the rat race, there is an upward trend in consuming junk foods, which are certainly unhealthy dishes. Obviously, eating the kind of food is in tandem with the higher chance of suffering from a variety of diseases such as obesity, high blood sugar or even heartbreak.
On the other hand, there is a fact that thanks to the evolution of technology, medical facilities are enhanced, which means that a host of diseases are likely remedied in the future. For instance, scientists have found a range of solutions to cure some types of cancer, which could not be solve in the past and it gives a hopeful future regarding medicine field. additionally, there are an increase in opened sport centers, therefore, people will have an array of choices in choosing location to do exercise and to participate in their favorite sport.
In conclusion, from my perspective, i believe that the average standard of people's health could be reduced to some extend, nonetheless, it would not be true since the development of modern technology and the increase appearance of sport centres.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Additionally
...opeful future regarding medicine field. additionally, there are an increase in opened sport ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... In conclusion, from my perspective, i believe that the average standard of pe...
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...peoples health could be reduced to some extend, nonetheless, it would not be true sinc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74795075162 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4660569645 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1818181818 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188025629909 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666744375875 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462296045141 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121142018642 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395528214871 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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