Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have gone on to become professional dancers with top dance companies.
For many, Dance is not just a profession but a passion, a "dream coming true" if they follow it professionally. In last few years, the mentality of people for dance has significantly changes. In older times, very few people used to respect it as a profession, it was more like time pass activity but recently, it has taken itself to a summit. Now, it is more than just an interesting activity or passion, it is treated as one of proper career options and profession where people not just earn money but also the pride and respect which everyone seek in life. Thus, people have started taking dance classes seriously for their children from very early age only.
Pirouettes Ballet School, as suggested by author, has most intensive teaching program and their teachers are experts who have performed in most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Also, lot of their students have become professional dancers with top dance companies. However, from the information available, it seems to be very good option for only Ballet dance, but there are other forms of dance as well, like Bharatnatyam, Hip-Hop etc. which lot of students want to learn and are most interested in.
Moreover, there is no information regarding the fees and compensation available for the school. Generally, With great name a big amount of money is associated which not all students might be capable of paying and so for such students it's definitely not a great choice.
Therefore, it can't be guaranteed that Pirouettes Ballet school is the only or the best choice available to students who want to learn dance. It can be good choice for the students who have good financial condition and are interested in Ballet form of dance. While, it may not be a great option the student who either lack enough resources to get into the school or are more willing to learn other forms of dance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...able of paying and so for such students its definitely not a great choice. There...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ly not a great choice. Therefore, it cant be guaranteed that Pirouettes Ballet sc...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...ly not a great choice. Therefore, it cant be guaranteed that Pirouettes Ballet sc...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to dance'
Suggestion: to dance
...available to students who want to learn dance. It can be good choice for the students...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.878125 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66860911513 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534375 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8108760143 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329568448593 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112002237669 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118733702583 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194332042061 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134169730015 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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